help with your thesis and use of resources; however‚ I feel that some work on your content development as well as your thesis will make your essay stronger and more effective overall‚ so let’s get started. Summary This essay discusses the common causes of eating disorders in teenagers and defines bulimia and anorexia nervosa‚ the two most common eating disorders. Strengths This essay is well-written at the sentence level; clear writing is important in all kinds of writing. Main Idea/Thesis
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Rui Zhao Mrs.Fried ENG 030 04 November 2009 Cause and Effect Becoming a foreign student is a very important and arduous experience in a person’s life. At the same time it is an experience that will change a person’s lifestyle and personality forever. When I became a foreign student‚ many things changed or had to change. Being a foreign student you are going to miss your country so much‚ you have to get acquainted with the new environment‚ and you
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with family. Some of the first friends we have in life are our siblings or cousins. This fact causes young people to often be more critical of one another. Expecting them to rise to a higher standard‚ because they are “family” as well as putting pressure on themselves to measure up to their perceived smarter or more attractive family members. Fear of failing therefore embarrassing their families can cause severe anxiety and feelings of low self-worth. A younger brother or sister often feels inferior
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One’s personality also influences how he arranges or décors the living room or area. Introverts will design his room or office to discourage social interactions‚ while extrovert does the vice versa. Moreover‚ extroverts prefer the upbeat and conventional music than introverts. Most important‚ extraverts are likely to react to pleasant effects‚ like positive reward or celebrations. Beside to the mentioned difference‚ extroverts and introverts feel differently toward different situation. Overall‚ extroverts
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Khadar Sufi Abdul Kader Cause-Effect Writing and Research October 11‚ 2014 Emotional Support Two years ago‚ I met a beautiful young girl name Salma. I met her at a family luncheon gathering. Her brother introduced us and immediately a connection was formed. After a couple of months of trying to get to know each other‚ I started to discover great things about her. She was extremely smart and kind. She had a great personality that shined. Salma was always a positive person and tried to
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Navarro4 How is texting affecting the literacy of teens Awyanna Mayberry Period :4 5/22/13 Text messaging can affect a person’s social skills‚ writing skills‚ driving skills. The money that people spend on phones and texting can cause financial hardship. Text messaging has begun to have a detrimental effect on teens writing skills. They use abbreviations‚ as most teenagers get used to short texting‚ some of their grades dropped due to the spelling errors they make. So many teens get used to
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Cause and Effect Eating Disorders What causes somebody to have an obsession with becoming so thin that it could seriously harm their body? Eating disorders are becoming an increasing problem. Women as well as men are falling into the trap of believing the idea that we all need to look like the people on television. It is estimated that eight million Americans can be associated with an eating disorder‚ seven million of that population is female and the other one million is male (Broccolo-Philbin
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Causes of Obesity Lately‚ obesity has become one of the most serious problems in 2012. Obesity rates have increased quickly every year. In Saudi Arabia there are more than 23% women and 20% men are overweight. Random food‚ less activities and emotional issues are the major causes of obesity. Firstly‚ eating randomly is one of the main causes of getting obese. Fast food increases obesity so fast‚ especially if you eat it every day. Moreover‚ eating snacks between meals make the possibility
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place and that too all alone. One has to be very strong and have to start taking care of everything on his own. And the effects of living in a foreign country would prove to be on a positive note. It makes an individual independent. Living away from your country can be a really interesting and unforgettable experience‚ but at the same time it has very important effects on one ’s life. There are people who like to have privacy and like to be in their own world‚ but there are also people
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Six Basic Causes of Impaired Driving Advanced Age‚ Alcohol‚ Drugs‚ Emotions‚ Fatigue‚ Inexperience Why is impaired driving an issue and why should you care? You are only as safe as the other drivers on the road. If there was an impaired driver on the road that was distracted and‚ for example‚ ran a red light‚ and you were the car who was just following the rules and going through a green light‚ and they hit you‚ you are now hurt and have to deal with this issue. Impaired driving does not just
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