details - a specific example from the work used to provide evidence for your topic sentence/support thesis. Commentary - your explanation and interpretation of the concrete detail. Commentary explains how the concrete detail proves the thesis. Clincher/Concluding Sentence - last sentence of the body paragraph. It concludes the paragraph by tying the concrete details and commentary back to the major thesis. Conclusion: the last paragraph where you are given one last chance to convince the reader
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know‚ [transition B] I was on the floor with mud all over my white-laced dress. Surprisingly‚ lots of people helped me get up and get the mud off the dress. I’m very thankful to have great friends to help me though embarrassing moments like these. [clincher] Another place [transition] where embarrassing moments happen to me is at (2) restaurants. These not only affect me but also people around me. For example‚ [transition A] Nick and I were waiting for out food to get here when this bird flew across
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made a huge collection of things he would find that he would make things with. He has painted many portraits of himself and other people as an inspiration. He has invented a lot of things but three things have been very well-known. They are the clincher wrench‚ electric brake‚ and windmill. One of his first inventions was an electric brake. It was invented in 1901. The electric brake was made for trains and street cars. When Ochoa made the electric brake he sold it to a company to make money
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both hands. In my speech I found myself fiddling with the note card while giving good eye contact to my audience. I was talking extremely fast and not making my words clear enough. On my outline I had my conclusion and clincher but during the video I did not restate my anthems or clincher to my audience. On my feedback cards‚ it was a lot of positive things I did well but my weakness was slowing down my talking speed and no conclusion. The feedback given to me by my audience was exactly how I felt the
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------------------------------------------------- Name: Lawrence Chen ------------------------------------------------- Of Mice and Men Essay Graphic Organizer for Chapter Questions Chapter: 4 Question: Why is Crooks so unhappy? Mistreated‚ He doesn’t have friends-unconfident and seriously mentally damaged from the lasting effects of loneliness. CATCHY LEAD+BACKGROUND INFO+THESIS STATEMENT:- One sentence- 3 significant pts- Parallel structure- Controlling IdeaUse the wording from
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no one falls in love at first sight. Unless a person puts out some kind of a fake facade‚ or a profound trait. Facades or skills are only aesthetically beneficial for the receiver’s preference. In real life despite having that‚ there would be a clincher wherein both sides would settle in‚ there are no magic spells‚ just dedication. This no
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Personal Response to Texts Essay Format English Language Arts In a personal response to text essay the writer may choose to keep the format of the essay critical‚ in which the pieces of literature presented are analyzed. The writer will also relate their own experience as it relates to the material provided using emotional and sensory detail. The important thing to remember is that this format of an essay‚ unlike the critical/analytical response‚ allows you to use personal pronouns (except the word
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Adran Wilson Essay Plan/Outline I am sure you have enjoyed the ease of connecting to people from different corners of the globe with just one click of a button; whether it is via the internet or even a cellular phone. These types of technology are considered to be modern technology. According to Longman’s Dictionary of Contemporary English (2007)‚ Modern Technology speaks to usage of modern tools‚ techniques‚ crafts‚ systems or methods of organization. Wanda Thibodeaux‚ eHow contributor stated
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Informative Analysis The purpose of an informative briefing is to enhance the audience’s knowledge about a specific topic in which the speaker is an expert. The goal of the presenter is to present clear-cut information in an interesting yet enlightening manner. The purpose of my speech was to enhance the audience’s awareness of what marijuana is‚ as well as to dispel many myths that exist around it that emanate from the fact that it is an illegal substance‚ causing often untrue information to be
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|Advice |Student work |What does better writing look like? | |Begin with strong assertive language that shows |In the film Mississippi Burning‚ racism is represented effectively throughout the |Mississippi Burning is a film which powerfully and evocatively represents racism in a manner which | |what you think.
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