wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Gregory! I am Kobe F.‚ and I am happy to read and comment on your work today. I like your choice of Jimmy Cross for your discussion because he suffers the most important conflict between desire and duty in O’Brien’s story. Below I suggest some improvements to your thesis statement‚ conclusion‚ and comma use to help you enhance your paper. The ERF and embedded comments include the draft being on topic and grammatically correct as in “Help Requested.” So here we go!
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understand the way us "teenagers" think. Conventional wisdom has made us believe that our current generation might be the "worst generation we’ve ever seen". In my personal opinion‚ I disagree with this statement. I don’t think it’s possible for one to compare two generations with each other. Both of these generations have its pro’s and cons‚ which in turn molded the mentality of the people living in that era. For example‚ people in the late 50’s and 60’s didn’t own computers‚ cellular phones and other
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Compare and Contrast Essay Julia Krulee COM/155 August 27‚ 2012 Denise Evans Wendy’s and Subway While Wendy’s and Subway are both popular fast food restaurants‚ Subway has more to offer in terms of healthy eating‚ cost savings‚ and environmental friendliness. During my work week‚ I take a daily hour lunch break‚ mostly to walk around and breath in some fresh air before going back to finish my day. My usual scenery is long lines in every fast food restaurant drive through‚ and who is not
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A Home on the Other Side of the Mirror “Dillon‚ it’s time to go!” His father yelled from his car. His room was the only place left he could think. But maybe that was a good thing. He carried his suitcase downstairs‚ each step seeming like an inch closer to rock bottom. The door slams behind him‚ leaving the sounds of anger to echo throughout the house in despair that his mother might be listening and come running after him. She was gone now though. It had been only a few days since his mother
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Brittany Adams English 102-C01 Short Story Essay November 26‚ 2011 A book can’t be judge by its cover‚ just like a character. Flannery O’Connor’s “A Good Man is Hard to Find” begins with an innocent family vacation ending in a tragic deaths after taking a detour. “Where Are You Going‚ Where Have You Been?” by Joyce Carol Oates features a typical teenage girl who begs for attention from males and meets her match at the end. The Misfit and Arnold Friend’s characteristics make them frightening
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The Little Mule that Could “Clip‚ clop‚ clip‚ clop‚ such a reassuring sound”‚ Jenny thought as she pulled the plow through Mr. Dawkins’ fields. Jenny could feel the soil beneath her hooves‚ and the steady beat of her lively heart. Behind her was Dave‚ the small black boy‚ who was tasked to lead Jenny through the fields. But she already knew the way; she had done it‚ day in and day out‚ for as long as she could remember. From the time she was a little mule‚ she remembered her parents had done this
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gesture…Death will not find me.”(Maugham 1). The reader can pinpoint with this fear and understand the story better. On the other hand‚ in “Godfather Death” the character welcomes Death in a normal manner‚ he isn’t afraid of having Death in front of him. Also‚ the poor man wasn’t afraid to bluff Death the first nor the second time he was performing the surgeries. Every story has an ending‚ in “Appointment in Samarra” the Merchant thinks he is getting away from his fate‚ Death
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STORY OF MAYKAPAL In the beginning‚ the sky was very low; it was possible to touch it with a long bamboo pole. Because of this proximity‚ everything on earth was burnt by the intense heat of the sun. The rivers and the seas were boiling tremendously. Then suddenly from nowhere‚ a huge man appeared on earth. This enormous being was called Maykapal. Some of the ancient Tagalogs‚ said that Maykapal was the Lord of the universe who came down to earth to correct some mistakes in his work. However
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All interesting authors expose their readers to experience the essence of the story. In this case‚ Toni Cade Bambara uses the illustration of her short story “The Lesson”‚ in order to convey the reality of a 1960’s ghetto‚ African American community through the eyes of a young girl named Sylvia. Sylvia is a young‚ fearless girl who has an audacious and outspoken nature despite her constant use of profanity and insulting judgments of Miss Moore. Moreover‚ Toni Bambara’s technique of literacy in
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When He Came Back Sasha Boswell He had spent my whole life avoiding me‚ leaving my mother and I to look after ourselves‚ no help‚ no calls‚ no child support‚ not even one single letter just to say hi. The day he called was when my world had changed. I would finally meet him‚ the man from the small photo propped up against the brick wall above the fireplace. My curtains were wide open and the sunlight filtered in‚ creating little dust beams as mum liked to call them. The big oak tree by my window
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