wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Gregory! I am Kobe F.‚ and I am happy to read and comment on your work today. I like your choice of Jimmy Cross for your discussion because he suffers the most important conflict between desire and duty in O’Brien’s story. Below I suggest some improvements to your thesis statement‚ conclusion‚ and comma use to help you enhance your paper. The ERF and embedded comments include the draft being on topic and grammatically correct as in “Help Requested.” So here we go!
Premium Sentence Clause Dependent clause
understand the way us "teenagers" think. Conventional wisdom has made us believe that our current generation might be the "worst generation we’ve ever seen". In my personal opinion‚ I disagree with this statement. I don’t think it’s possible for one to compare two generations with each other. Both of these generations have its pro’s and cons‚ which in turn molded the mentality of the people living in that era. For example‚ people in the late 50’s and 60’s didn’t own computers‚ cellular phones and other
Premium Roller coaster Sexual intercourse Human sexual behavior
Compare and Contrast Essay Julia Krulee COM/155 August 27‚ 2012 Denise Evans Wendy’s and Subway While Wendy’s and Subway are both popular fast food restaurants‚ Subway has more to offer in terms of healthy eating‚ cost savings‚ and environmental friendliness. During my work week‚ I take a daily hour lunch break‚ mostly to walk around and breath in some fresh air before going back to finish my day. My usual scenery is long lines in every fast food restaurant drive through‚ and who is not
Premium Nutrition Health Food
hurt or injured. A perfect world‚ or utopia‚ is the exact opposite of a dystopia‚ which is the type of the literature the stories “The Lottery” and “The Veldt” are. I would never want to live in the dystopian lives of “The Lottery” or “The Veldt” for two reasons‚ and in the “The Lottery” for another reason.The first reason would be that I would feel fairly controlled in the stories. In “The Lottery‚” society seems to control all of the community members. Their society told them that every year in June
Premium Dystopia Brave New World Aldous Huxley
A Home on the Other Side of the Mirror “Dillon‚ it’s time to go!” His father yelled from his car. His room was the only place left he could think. But maybe that was a good thing. He carried his suitcase downstairs‚ each step seeming like an inch closer to rock bottom. The door slams behind him‚ leaving the sounds of anger to echo throughout the house in despair that his mother might be listening and come running after him. She was gone now though. It had been only a few days since his mother
Free Family English-language films 2004 albums
Brittany Adams English 102-C01 Short Story Essay November 26‚ 2011 A book can’t be judge by its cover‚ just like a character. Flannery O’Connor’s “A Good Man is Hard to Find” begins with an innocent family vacation ending in a tragic deaths after taking a detour. “Where Are You Going‚ Where Have You Been?” by Joyce Carol Oates features a typical teenage girl who begs for attention from males and meets her match at the end. The Misfit and Arnold Friend’s characteristics make them frightening
Premium Joyce Carol Oates
Compare and Contrast: Beowulf vs. Mr. Incredible While Beowulf and Disney’s The Incredibles’ main character‚ Mr. Incredible‚ live in different time periods‚ they both exhibit characteristics worthy of a hero. Mr. Incredible is a 21st century hero who uses his innate abilities to fight crime. In addition to protecting the community‚ Mr. Incredible balances his duties with being a strong father figure to his family. Further down the time line of history‚ Beowulf is an 8th century hero who‚ despite
Premium The Incredibles Beowulf Hero
Compare and Contrast: Cal State LA & Cal Poly Pomona Cal State Universities are excellent choices because they are part of the most affordable public education systems in the nation and promote access to higher education. When deciding to go to a university like Cal Poly Pomona or Cal State Los Angeles‚ there can be many things that need to be considered in order to make the right choice. These include finances‚ level of independence‚ and whether or not a major has been determined. Students
Premium Los Angeles Academic degree
So Jamestown and Plymouth are two colonies that were established by Europeans around the 1600‚ but when established‚ they both had different reasons for creating their colonies. When reading these two stories‚ you can already tell that these two colonies have a tremendous difference‚ but also you can identify the similarities of these two colonies. Jamestown a colony in Virginia‚ which was a humongous disaster in my opinion. Around 300 settlers migrated to Jamestown and arrived on May 14‚ 1607 and
Premium United States Native Americans in the United States Slavery
The development of children and adolescents has always been a topic of debate‚ not till much later in the psychology world was this subject looked at as its own. With the help of psychologist such as Freud and Erickson developmental theories were able to help understand this type of development. Children are ever changing and growing with the combination of these three theories; psychoanalytical‚ learning‚ and cognitive theories‚ they are able to develop. These theories help children become part
Premium Theory of cognitive development Sigmund Freud Developmental psychology