Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Kamila! I’m Karlo V. and I am going to help you with your draft today. Here are some points you might want to think about as you revise
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consultant? Mr. Rutland’s project vision was to save Paramount Theatre‚ a local landmark‚ by establishing a National Jazz Hall of Fame that could be used as a museum and performance center. The board of Directors determined that to save the Paramount Theatre a minimum of $600‚000 would be needed‚ which caused the plan to unravel. However‚ to support their passion and love for jazz‚ they continued their efforts to establish the NJHoF in Charlottesville‚ VA. Mr.
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Never Stop Trying My favorite Korea pop singer is Ailee because she is a talented person and she is my role model. Whenever I’m feeling down‚ her music makes me happy and relaxed. I accidentally heard her song few months ago in a coffee shop and I love her singing right away. She has an amazing voice. Her voice sounds like an angel sings. She also has been studying how to rap on her own. She is not just can sing well but she is also a pretty good dancer. She started her singing career by making
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Concert Report The concert I attended was North Idaho College Wind Symphony In Concert‚ featuring the Whitworth University Wind Symphony. It took place in the Schuler Preforming Arts Center at the North Idaho College in Coeur d’Alene on March 21st. The main pieces which I will be focusing on are Aspen Jubilee‚ Walking Tune‚ and The Invincible Eagle. All of these pieces were performed by the Whitworth University Wind Symphony‚ whose conductor was Richard Strauch. Strauch conducted a symphony of 55
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that we all spend money on luxury goods for ourselves at the cost of other lives? If we can prevent something bad from happening at a comparatively small cost to ourselves‚ we should indeed do so and do have a responsibility on situations like this. Singer states that we ought to prevent death and suffering from lack of food‚ shelter and medical care. As many may think that they have nothing to do with this‚ they clearly do. Many individuals would rather spend money on a shirt that they do not need
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"The President’s Own" United States Marine Band performed Monday October 2‚ 2006 at 8pm in the PAC. The director was Lieutenant Colonel Michael J. Colburn and the assistant director was Captain Jason K. Fettig. The different numbers in the performance were "Summon the Heroes"‚ "Guillaume Tell Duo Brillant"‚ "The High School Cadets"‚ "Scherzo and Finale" from Symphony No. 4 in F minor‚ "Semper Fidelis"‚ "Lincolnshire Posy"‚ "American Spirituals"‚ and "The Stars and Stripes Forever"
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helps establish the mood of the song. After the spoken exposition‚ the sung musical number begins and the piano number picks up tempo again‚ this time in a more jazz sounding melody. The song returns the first melody‚ but this time accounts for the added voice and the piano accommodates cadences with variation in the pitch and melody. The singer is then joined with a chorus‚ provided by some side characters‚ but the melody still remain constant. The next musical number is titled “It’s a Privilege to
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Live Concert Paper On November 22‚ 2013‚ I went to the B.B Kings Restaurant and Blues club in downtown Nashville. From five o’clock to nine o’clock at night‚ Carl Stewart Band played. Then from nine o’clock to one o’clock in the morning the B.B King all-stars played. I did not stay that late though. The Carl Stewart Band was mainly blues with a little bit of light rock. They had acoustic guitars‚ electric guitar‚ drums and a few more instruments. All of their songs seemed to have related to life
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world‚ I chose two concerts to attend that were completely different from each other‚ in terms of performance‚ genre‚ and audience appearance. The first concert I went to was held in the Ted Constant Center at Old Dominion University‚ hosting Hip-Hop and Trap artist and songwriter Lil Uzi Vert. He’s categorized as an charismatic‚ hyper‚ and a naturally entertaining artist who young teens to college adults gravitate to due to the non-traditional rap he portrays. The second concert I attend was right
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Contents 1 Jazz jennings 2 transgender rights 3 People helping the cause 4 What can we do Jazz Jennings A Transgender Teen Activists are people who are willing to fight for their causes and protect their rights no matter what‚ like Jazz Jennings‚ Jazz is an openly transgender teen who has written a book and has two brothers. She currently lives in South Florida. Jazz has been diagnosed with Gender Identity Disorder (GDA) now known as dysphoria within the trans community. Jazz runs a youtube
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