Technique Lesson: Sentence Variety Hacker 117 - 119 When a rough draft is filled with too many same-sounding sentences‚ try to inject some variety – as long as you can do so without sacrificing clarity or ease of reading. Grammar checkers are of little help with sentence variety. It takes a human ear to know when and why sentence variety is needed. 1. Use a variety of sentence structures: • A writer should not rely too heavily on simple sentences and compound sentences‚ for the effect
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video called Kanzi and Novel Sentences it is clear that Kanzi does understand what is being asked of him. He is able to follow commands that are said by his trainer‚ which demonstrates an ability to comprehend language as seen within the video. The reasoning why this video can be used as evidence that Kanzi does comprehend language is the fact the trainer is saying new or novel sentences. Meaning that Kanzi has never heard these words put together in those sentences. Kanzi is able to take the action
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Soldier Sentenced to death for Fort Hood shooting A military jury sentenced Maj. Nidal Hasan to death for a 2009 shooting in Fort Hood‚ Texas. A death sentence for an army personal hardly ever happens. Maj. Nidal Hasan walked into a medical building where army soldiers were getting medical check-ups and shouted ‘Allahu akbar’ which means in Arabic for “God is great!.” He then opened fire with a laser-sighted handgun. He killed thirteen army men and women that day and injured over 30. When police
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The Rotter Incomplete Sentences Black (RISB) is a projective method of studying personality in a semi-structured scoring technique (Rotter‚ Lah‚ & Rafferty‚ n.d.). The RISB was originally used as means of screening large groups of soldiers to evaluate adjustment and fitness to return to duty and to obtain specific information for evaluation and treatment‚ however now it is primarily used to help guide initial clinical interviews (Corsini‚ 2010). The RISB is primarily used for individuals at the college
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Personal Constructs The concept of personal constructs was developed by George Kelly when he formulated the cognitive personality theory‚ the Personal Constructs Theory. This theory is based on the notion that individuals categorize personality and behavior of themselves or of others unfailingly; and every individual will respectively categorize the same personality and behavior differently (McAdams‚ 2006). Like scientists develop theories‚ individuals develop inner replicas of reality to explain
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and personality. Para 2 Topic Sentence: International student had a lost in confidence when they are speaking in English. Support 1：Students are afraid of making mistake when they are speaking English while they can speak fluently in their own language. Support 2: They will get nervous is using second language but more comfortable in speaking the first language. Support 3: The student will talk less in English than in their first language. Para 3 Topic Sentence: Student uses less gesture to
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in order to illustrate or demonstrate a point. The topic sentence should establish a contention which the author will set out to prove in the paragraph. example: Kahild’s family went on a fishing trip to Musandam. So what? What is the appeal? Fishing at Musandam proved to be an enjoyable outing For Khalid and his family. • This sentence sets out something to be proven in the paragraph and is more appealing
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homelessness. Loss of income due to government shortening and economic changes‚ the release of mentally ill patients and poor health. Finally‚ lack in social supports to the homeless. II. Body Paragraph #1: Government and Economic Changes. A. Topic Sentence: Modern homeless started as a result of economic stresses in society and reductions in the availabilities of affordable housing such as single room occupancies for pooper people. 1. Support #1: An
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Hook sentence(s): Growing up in the heroic path‚ Beowulf was divided in such a differenct ways of one’s point of views. B Set-up/Hints: Burton Raffel‚ an author who translated this book‚ shown how Beowulf structured though his journeys‚ or his quests‚ to be a real hero for everyone. C Focusing theme/idea: Beowulf have been in many many fights shaped his thoughts and his behaviors which related to the theme of the books. D Thesis statement: According to the theme of the work as a whole‚ Beowulf
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Gender Constructs within Hawthorne’s Works Often found within Nathaniel Hawthorne’s writings woman are depicted as beautiful‚ humble woman who are either suffering at the hands of strong willed‚ arrogant men. “A quiet‚ shy fellow prone to a genteel nature ill-suited to the aggressive competitive nature of the era ’s masculinity‚ Hawthorne struggled to rationalize and justify his writing career with the imagined indictment of his Puritan forefathers that he was a ‘mere scribbler‚ a story-teller’”
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