1st person writing‚ readers are able to go through the emotion and stress experienced by the protagonist that Ioannides uses to convey the theme. This is evident in how Ioannides ends the story. The story ends on page () with the single sentence paragraph‚ “They didn’t care to know what happened to that Gregory‚ alive or dead‚” Ending on this dark note gets readers to feel a deep sympathy for the protagonist. He went through a whirlwind of thoughts and emotions of having to kill his friend and see
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PIE paragraph model do help me a lot in how to develop a paragraph reasonably and logically. Before I learned the PIE paragraph model‚ my writing process was blindly and desultorily. After given a topic‚ I just slightly thought of what it was and what it might concern about‚ and then I wrote them down without even placing them in an organized order‚ making my paragraph unpersuasive and unfocused. Even more‚ though it was so “improvisational”‚ I didn’t revise it‚ and fragments and run-ons would not
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Maria Luz Palma April 21st‚ 2015 Mannion period 7 DBQ The Crusades took place in the Middle East between 1095 and 1291. They were used to gain a leg up on trading‚ have more land to show hegemony‚ and to please the gods. Based upon the documents‚ the Crusades between 1095 and 1291 were caused primarily by religious devotion rather than by the desire for economic and political gain. They were different wars which afterward lead to cultural diffusion and urbanization. The
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Thesis Paragraph 1. Title: People Pleaser 2. Hook (Wow ) Sentence: : It took me 32 years to realize pleasing everyone is impossible. I am a recovering people pleaser. 3. Essay Map: I had to Stop trying to please everyone I had to Learn to say NO I had to realize it is okay to put
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In the article “Unteaching the Five-Paragraph Essay”‚ Marie Foley argues that the five-paragraph formula restrains students from actively thinking. The five-paragraph structure is still used today because teachers are continuing to teach students the formula. The formula is said to be easier to teach to a class rather than to teach individual students different patterns of organization. Foley says that the formula being taught is easier on them to teach and to grade because of how crowded the English
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PATTERNS OF PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT 1) Narrative - An account of a sequence of events‚ usually in chronological order. Example : "The barber was cutting our hair‚ and our eyes were closed--as they are so likely to be. . . . Deep in a world of our own‚ he heard‚ from far away‚ a voice saying goodbye. It was a customer of the shop‚ leaving. ’Goodbye‚’ he said to the barbers. ’Goodbye‚’ echoed the barbers. And without ever returning to consciousness‚ or opening our eyes‚ or thinking‚ we joined in
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MALAYAN COLLEGES LAGUNA MALAYAN COLLEGES LAGUNA (5 spaces) Thesis Title (Font 14‚ boldfaced‚ Uppercase lowercase) (5 spaces) Student’s Name (Font 12) Thesis Adviser: Adviser’s Name‚ Title Department (5 spaces) A thesis proposal submitted to Mapua Institute of Technology at Laguna Malayan Colleges Laguna Cabuyao‚ Laguna (6 spaces) In Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements For the Degree of Bachelor of Science in Industrial Engineering (5 spaces) April 2014
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(THESIS FORMAT) PRELIMINARY PAGES Title Page • Title – short (length is 10-12 words); reflective of the content‚ problem‚ and the main variables to be studied; free of value judgment; should be written in inverted pyramid boldface‚ and capital letters • Author’s Name / Month and Year of Completion • Institutional Affiliation Acknowledgment Abstract - brief‚ comprehensive summary of the contents of the manuscript
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Comparison Paragraph In spite of these differences‚ the similarities are striding. First‚ both cities are the political centers of their countries. The president of France lives in the heart of Paris‚ in the Elysees Palace. Likewise‚ the president of the United States has its meeting place in Washington‚ in the Capitol. Second‚ the two cities look similar. L’Enfant‚ the French engineer who designed Washington‚ was greatly influenced by the layout of the capital of France. For this reason‚ many
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Response Paragraph I really enjoyed reading Alexie’s essay. What he writes about is very expressive‚ and you get the full point of what he is trying to express. The main part that touched me is when he is explaining how he was treated‚ and what he had to go through just because he was smart‚ and wasn’t afraid to express himself. The other children would beat him up; he was looked down on‚ and also treated as an outsider because of this. Alexie didn’t care though because he knew that there was something
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