What is the editing stage? The editing stage is when you check your essay for mistakes and correct them. Editing Steps: Grammar and Spelling 1. Check your spelling. 2. Check your grammar. 3. Read your essay again. 4. Make sure each sentence has a subject. 5. Make sure your subjects and verbs agree with each other. 6. Check the verb tenses of each sentence. 7. Make sure that each sentence makes sense. Style and Organization 1. Make sure your essay has an introduction‚ supporting
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Why did Prohibition fail‚ and why was it repealed? The roots of this problem lay in the wording of 1920’s Volstead Act‚ a piece of federal legislation. Specifically‚ the Volstead Act mandated “concurrent enforcement” of prohibition—that is‚ enforcement through federal laws and agencies as well as by state and local laws and agencies. While lawmakers argued that the Volstead Act would translate into extensive enforcement‚ in practice it meant the opposite. For example‚ in states where many residents
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Why Khazanah Scholarship is for you? My first word was “Gajah” or elephant in Malay. However‚ that does not mean I am destined to be a zoo vet. As I grew up‚ airplanes in the blue sky always fascinated me. How the airplane flied overwhelmed me for years. Since that‚ my journey in the science world began. I then started playing with Lego‚ a line of construction toys and enjoyed building. Throughout my school years I had triumphed in many robotic competitions and science fairs. My passion of
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Tijana Saranovic Ms. Reicherz World History April 22‚ 2014 The Renaissance DBQ Essay The Renaissance was a period of big chance in European history. In the years between the Fall of Rome and the mid14th century‚ the Catholic Church dominated Europe and man was seen as full of sin. How did the Renaissance change the way people thought about themselves? The Renaissance changed man’s view of the world in three ways‚ individualism‚ embracing life
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occupations that children actively participate in is play. Play shapes development for more mature skills later in life based on resources‚ environment‚ opportunities‚ parenting style‚ and many other factors. Without play‚ children are often delayed in the development of their skills and not able to fully integrate reflexes or reach developmental milestones within a normal time frame. Play is essential for a child’s development because it allows for the child to explore their environment‚ social
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was shocked. Not only did the split between the Soviet Union and China create a divide in worldwide Communist leadership but also marked a turning point in the Cold War era. In his book‚ The Sino-Soviet Split‚ historian Lorenz M. Lüthi describes the collapse of the Sino-Soviet alliance to have been as significant to the time period as “the construction of the Berlin Wall‚ the Cuban Missile Crisis‚ the Second Vietnam War and the Sino-American rapprochement” (2010‚ 1). This essay seeks to explore
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Where do volcanoes and earthquakes occur? In geography it is important to be able to describe geographical patterns. The map below shows some of the strongest earthquakes and active volcanoes in the world. Can you notice a pattern in the distribution (spread) of volcanoes and earthquakes?
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DBQ With the era of American Reconstruction in America during the mid to late 1800’s came a sense of opportunity and hope for its people. America was on the move as nation‚ railroads being built faster than ever and the freedmen looking to find their niche in society. Although in the beginning the government provided support for these new citizens‚ efforts toward reconstruction faded as the years passed. Those efforts faded to a point where they were all but nonexistent‚ and with the unwritten Compromise
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Silver DBQ Essay The global flow of silver from the mid-sixteenth century to the early eighteenth century had vast effects both socially and economically around the world. By this time an interregional trade network had been clearly established and world trade was booming. When China‚ a prominent trade nation‚ accepted silver as its currency and would only exchange for it‚ the importance of silver increased. This new rapid scramble for silver proved to be both beneficial and disastrous. While
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Booker T. Washington vs. William E.B.Du Bois DBQ By: Ryan Wolf Segregation had been present in the United States since the early 1600’s. African Americans were feeling the brunt of this segregation during the late 19th century and early 20th century. Two men took completely different approaches as to how to deal with this unfair treatment of African Americans; Booker T. Washington‚ and William E.B. Du Bois. Booker T. Washington took a more gradual approach towards African American equality
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