Chandell Gabler English 099-22-Intro to College Writing 9:05-10:15 am Professor Braxton-Robinson/Professor Sheffield Assignment: Write a Descriptive Essay describing a storm you have witnessed. The storm I witnessed was Hurricane Sandy. When I first heard of the hurricane I thought it wouldn’t be as bad as some people were prediciting‚ but as the storm approached I certainly changed my mind. As we sat in the house it became very real how bad the storm was going to be. It was scary to
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English Final Exam Unity: Achieved when all the elements in an essay contribute to the development of a single idea or thesis. Similarly‚ a paragraph is unified when each sentence contributes to the development of the central though expressed in the topic sentence of that paragraph. * In a unified paragraph‚ each sentence helps develop the main idea or the gist of the paragraph. The main idea often suggest a new‚ interesting relationship between two other ideas or facts not otherwise connected
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Imagine you just finished working your nine to five job and your boss is livid at you for not finishing your project by its deadline. You’re frustrated and want to get home. You stroll into the subway station and board the train en route to your house. You take a seat at the back of the train and just sit there with anguish on your mind. The train shuts its doors and the train starts moving forward. It’s a chilly winter evening and there’s a thunderstorm brewing outside. The wind is fierce‚ ricocheting
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Sean Lesure Per.3 English 11 AP Mrs.Hamill Rough Draft of Descriptive essay I push the door open. The bell rings‚ with a soft but shrill ring. A wave of rubber gloves and disinfectant masked with air freshener smells are in the air . Chairs are cluttered in the waiting room of the dentists. Clusters of magazines lie on the wood coffee tables‚ shiny bright plastic showing logos and slogans. A little way forward from where I stand is a desk. A smiling
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Descriptive Essay Title: Your Ideal Roommate Living far away from home for couple of years for studying in colleges or universities allows many students have to acclimate themselves with many variations. One of these changes is living or sharing a same apartment or room with a completely strange person. In that case‚ how strangers could become an ideal roommates? This is about my ideal roommate Samantha who is a very cooperative person‚ would share a room together‚ and would have to help
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Descriptive Essay Final Draft In the United States there are a lot of hair styles that are extremely popular. Some women prefer a more comfortable or casual style that is easy to do in a hurry. While other women prefer a fashionable hair style. Sometimes it’s just easier to do a casual look while in a hurry or running late. There are Up-Do’s‚ Comfortable styles and styles for special occasions such as weddings and high school proms
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Kylie Harrison English 1104-34 October 8‚ 2012 Descriptive Essay It was a hot muggy afternoon during the early season of fall. The wind was strong that day‚ the force blowing against my hair causing it to rise and fall as the wind came and left without warning. I could feel the sun beating down upon my back‚ causing my body to fight against the heat to stay cool. The constant sound of voices ring in my ears and throb my forehead. I was at the picnic table outside the bridge of Bryant place
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Descriptive Essay Thick‚ strong oak wood was carved into curves and poles all connected to be shaped into the perfect rocking chair. It was painted a deep brown that glints gold when the sun shines on it. The armrests mold to your arms like they were carved precisely for you. It feels like your melting into chair even though it’s a stiff wooden frame. The seat cushion used to be thick and luscious but has become thinner and thinner as the years have passed. It remains tied to the chair by two
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Allie Keenan Dr. Doh Composition 1 Descriptive Essay 2/17/15 My Most Personal Place White blank walls‚ white cold tile floor‚ tucked in the basement away from my seven other roommates was my new bedroom. The only natural light in the room coming from the window the size of a picture frame. Moving into a new and unfamiliar place can be unsettling and exciting. I went to work moving my things in and making this 10 by 10 white empty box my new room. After two short days I completed my decorating and
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My Descriptive Essay “My hidden castle” When I was younger there was a place I used to go when I was sad‚ angry‚ or confused. I went there often. It was a rather large castle hidden on an Island and surrounded by a forest. It was where I felt safe. This was my hideaway when I was in foster care; somewhere I could go to when things got to be too much for me. The castle was a two story building that covered most of the island‚ apart from the forest that surrounded it. The caste was made of stone
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