In examining Zach Inglis’s scene breakdown of ‘Better Places to Go’‚ the overall scene breakdown gave an overwhelming sense of story plot rather than a scene-by-scene breakdown of the film. What I have noticed is that the document presented is a scene breakdown and treatment combined which was not the task at hand‚ making it difficult to mark. Some issues within the document that I wish to raise are formatting (abiding by editing house requirements)‚ the writing (readability) and its structure (layout
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is pitch black and raining outside. As I lookdown the street I can see the fog setting only feet away from me. It is on this evening when my curiosity gets the best of me. I want to know why my mother never allowed me to go down Cedar Crest Drive. I’ve heard many stories about a haunted house down there. The stories‚ however‚ have varied. I heard somebody had been gruesomely murdered in there. I also heard that a young man had starved himself to death. I heard he literally looked like a skeleton
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I Want a Husband I belong to a certain classification of people known as husbands. I am a Husband. And‚ while we’re on the subject‚ I am a father as well. Recently‚ one of my female friends divorced her husband of over 10 years. She has one child‚ who is‚ evidently‚ with her. She is now looking for a new husband‚ someone new‚ younger‚ and more attractive. I thought to myself‚ “why is she in such a hurry to find a new husband?” While I was mowing the lawn the other day‚ I began thinking about my
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Growing up‚ I watched my mother work from midnight to well into the next afternoon. I watched her endless strive to pay the bills every month‚ all while cooking dinner for our family. Reflecting upon her hard work has made me appreciate her even more that I already do‚ making her the woman I want to strive to be for my own family. This brings to me to my drive to help others. A smile on others is what motivates me to help others even more. Not only does it make them feel loved‚ but it also makes
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mature girl. I was born in Kansas. My parent’s came from Mexico therefore I’m Hispanic. I moved directly towards Tennessee 7 months ago. I appreciate doing plenty of things. My favorite athletics that I adore doing consist volleyball and basketball. My education is actually meaningful as long as I achieve my goals in life. On my free time I hang out with friends and play basketball. The things that I admire about school is that I get to meet brand-new people and I get smarter every time I go to school
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going to want to do is stay undetected. Wearing flashy clothes and shoes is going to blow your cover‚ so i would stick to some moderate fashion. Get just about any backpack you want‚ just not too vibrant. Black would be an ideal color of choice. Try to keep your hair at a normal length‚ not to long and certainly no crazy colors! While in class don’t be that student who constantly calls out‚ and be sure to always raise your hand‚ never blurt out an answer. On the other hand you don’t want to be the
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Descriptive Essay Title: Your Ideal Roommate Living far away from home for couple of years for studying in colleges or universities allows many students have to acclimate themselves with many variations. One of these changes is living or sharing a same apartment or room with a completely strange person. In that case‚ how strangers could become an ideal roommates? This is about my ideal roommate Samantha who is a very cooperative person‚ would share a room together‚ and would have to help
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Descriptive essay Tony Ding Block 2-1 My hometown- Ningbo My hometown Ningbo is in Zhejiang province which located in the south east part of china. The city lies south of the Hangzhou bay‚ facing the east china sea to the east.. it’s the centre of the province’s transportation network. Ningbo is a famous destination city for travelers; it’s also a historical city. There are many beautiful views in my hometown
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I think it is possible to repeat the past.i would love to go back 5 years ago without changing the way things are now. I would love to go back to when my aunt had her farm and i had my horse i miss being able to go out to the farm when i was having a bad day and going and riding my horse her name was star my aunt named her and that’s what i liked me and star we had a special bond just like you get with your best friend she could always tell when something was wrong she would always come over and
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Crisly Barcega I know I will scrape through in being a nurse. When I was looking into career options‚ nursing attracted my attention for a variety of reasons. You could go anywhere‚ work with adults‚ children‚ in public health‚ prisons‚ physicians offices‚ schools‚ factories‚ and were only limited by your level of education‚ I found that nursing could be what ever I would want to make it. People need nurses in all aspects of life and if I were to ever feel "expended out" in one area‚ I could educate
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