English Final Exam Unity: Achieved when all the elements in an essay contribute to the development of a single idea or thesis. Similarly‚ a paragraph is unified when each sentence contributes to the development of the central though expressed in the topic sentence of that paragraph. * In a unified paragraph‚ each sentence helps develop the main idea or the gist of the paragraph. The main idea often suggest a new‚ interesting relationship between two other ideas or facts not otherwise connected
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ENG12 – Descriptive Essay Chelsea Park Happiest Place on Earth Last Christmas‚ I spent 5 fun-filled days and 4 magical nights in Disneyland. Daily weather in Anaheim was beautiful. The driveway leading to the park entrance was lined with tall palm trees as they stretched to the heavens in the blazing sunshine. Everyone’s face shone with joy and the children shook their parent’s hands from side to side screaming happily. The sweet smell of fluffy
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Allie Keenan Dr. Doh Composition 1 Descriptive Essay 2/17/15 My Most Personal Place White blank walls‚ white cold tile floor‚ tucked in the basement away from my seven other roommates was my new bedroom. The only natural light in the room coming from the window the size of a picture frame. Moving into a new and unfamiliar place can be unsettling and exciting. I went to work moving my things in and making this 10 by 10 white empty box my new room. After two short days I completed my decorating and
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My Descriptive Essay “My hidden castle” When I was younger there was a place I used to go when I was sad‚ angry‚ or confused. I went there often. It was a rather large castle hidden on an Island and surrounded by a forest. It was where I felt safe. This was my hideaway when I was in foster care; somewhere I could go to when things got to be too much for me. The castle was a two story building that covered most of the island‚ apart from the forest that surrounded it. The caste was made of stone
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Pierre Sigue Foundations Descriptive Essay November 19th‚ 2012 Florida Universal Studios in Florida is a Theme park containing fun movie rides. It is not at all uncommon to see famous cartoon characters‚ such as Homer Simpson‚ roaming around the park. Teens and adults who possess strong stomachs may enjoy riding the various movie rides available. Universal Studios also has water rides available to keep people cool. As for the sweets‚ the funnel cakes are absolutely delicious. I would
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Descriptive Essay 10/16/13 A place that I can describe very well with all my senses is a place that a lot of people know about and that’s Disney world. It’s a place that I can describe so well because my family and I would go their every summer ever since I was a little child. People always ask me “how could you go their every year‚ don’t you get sick of it”. That’s never the case for me. I love going to Disney world it’s a getaway for me. When I walk through the front gates I literally forget
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Descriptive Essay Being from the jersey shore there is many options to choose from‚ but Belmar beach is the most beautiful and exciting beach. Every time you go to Belmar beach there is always someone new to sit down and have an ice cold drink with. Belmar is also known to have the best over-head waves that look smooth and glossy from the sun reflecting off the water. My favorite place to hangout is at Belmar beach on a hot sweaty day with a cool ocean breeze filled with a lot of variety of people
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FINAL DRAFT OF DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY ‘NARRATIVE AND DESCRIPTIVE WRITING’ READER 2013 Name : HAPSARI C. HANANDYA (Nanna) Student Numb. : 112012133 SATYA WACANA CHRISTIAN UNIVERSITY “Tlatar” The Beautiful Sketch of God Painting Wandering the beautiful place always make me feel enchanted. There are many beautiful place that God has given for us to be used and developed as best as possible. I remember one interesting place and always makes me want to visit it for the umpteenth time
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Essay 1: Descriptive Essay of a Beautiful Friend of Mine Helen Keller once said that “the best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched‚ they must be felt with the heart”. How is that even possible when you know someone that has been with you since the day you have met them‚ the person that considers you a friend but you consider them as something more than just friend sometimes‚ just sometimes. Having mixed feelings about someone that you know makes you sit and stare
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Jessica J. Sobá Dávila Mrs. Tecun English 101 Descriptive Essay: My Ideal Place to Live 10/15/14 As the years pass‚ I plan on how I want my future to be; I think about what kind of job I would have‚ if I would have a family of my own‚ but most importantly my ideal place to live. My ideal place to live unbelievably would be in the woods with nature. Most people would think I am crazy and might not even believe it but I love the nature. I first realized that the woods would be my ideal place to live
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