GCSE ENGLISH LANGUAGE UNIT 3: DESCRIPTIVE WRITING The Descriptive Writing task in Unit 3 is worth 7.5% of the subject award and is marked out of 20. The mark given for each of the examples provided is supported by comments related to the criteria given in the specification for (i) Content & Organisation; (ii) Sentence Structure‚ Punctuation & Spelling. A notional grade is indicated in each case‚ based on the way that the same mark scale for Writing has been used in the past‚ and consistent with
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Descriptive Writing As you enter the park by pushing its big black gate you can hear the shouting of kids and the air is filled with the voices of people. On the left and right hand side there are many trees with people sitting under them reading books or having picnics. In front there is a path that goes straight and then divides into two‚ one going to the left and the other to the right. If you take the right path you could hear the shouting of children louder than before. There are kids running
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finish my large amount of homework‚ I put it into the correct binder and return to the kitchen. In the kitchen‚ I return my books. I walk back into the living room and sit back down at my computer. I open my small black laptop and type in my password. After I am done on my laptop‚ I go into our small green bathroom and take a shower. When I am done‚ I walk into my bedroom that is filled with random things. I see stuffed animals‚ books I never read‚ my soft blue bed‚ and miscellaneous items. I lie down
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English Descriptive Writing The Orphanage The intimidating building brought terror through the walls. Moist beds from the children’s room from the endless nights of unnerving thoughts. The house represented nothing else but desperateness and loneliness. Happiness. The children will never achieve happiness. The house was distracting to all parents. The dull‚ dark walls took away the light from the depressed kids. It was like the light gave hope like a endless tunnel of loneliness with a spark of light
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The United States of America has had 44 presidents‚ all with various strengths and weaknesses. In a multi-paragraph essay‚ explain who you think was the best American president and why. Make sure to include specific examples and details to support your argument and why. As you write‚ remember your essay will be scored based on how well you: develop a multi-paragraph response to the assigned topic that clearly communicates your controlling idea to the audience. support your controlling idea
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English Descriptive Writing I was walking motionlessly scanning the street going to the shops‚ it was completely dark‚ the pavements felt as if they were asleep as it was so quite. I arrived at the shop reached down and picked up the ice cold milk white as a ghost. I purchased the milk with a two pound coin‚ as i was about to leave 4 youths hooded up and covering their faces also entered the shop and i could smell the overpowering smell of cannabis . I kept a safe distance from them. I walked
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During argument in one hearing‚ Army’s chief counsel Joseph Welch stated “Until this moment‚ Senator‚ I think I never really gauged your cruelty or your recklessness...Have you no sense of decency‚ sir‚ at long last?” - McCarthy’s political days ended after these hearings - December 1954- Senate voted to censure McCarthy for his conduct. Korean War: - Began June 25th 1950 - Fought between North Korea
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Descriptive writing – Train I walked up to the main entrance from the usual route I took every morning. The walls of the Train Station were panelled with clean cut glass there was no brick to be seen only large panels of glass and the occasional clean cut white glossed plates perfectly aligned with one another and reflecting the early morning sun. The building was contemporary; full of sharp edges‚ corners and vertical lines cutting through the city vista. As clean and neat as the building was the
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The Usage of Blast Furnace What is a Blast Furnace? A blast furnace is a type of metallurgical furnace used for smelting to produce industrial metals‚ generally iron. In a blast furnace‚ fuel‚ ore‚ and flux (limestone) are continuously supplied through the top of the furnace‚ while air (sometimes with oxygen enrichment) is blown into the lower section of the furnace‚ so that the chemical reactions take place throughout the furnace as the material moves downward. In the blast furnace‚ it is so
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The world seems hazy‚ like clouds have drifted into my vision and blinded me‚ forcing me to rely on my other senses. I listen‚ open up my ears to the world‚ but hear nothing except the occasional thud of heavy‚ ghost-like footsteps off in the distance. And then it is quiet‚ everything goes quiet‚ like all sound has been voided out of my ears‚ gone forever‚ leaving me trapped inside a prison that I don’t know how to escape. Suddenly‚ I feel the pounding in my head‚ a sharp‚ shooting pain‚ that
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