In my writing there have been a lot of approval with especially these parts of my writing focus and idea‚ and development and support and last but best organization. I’ll start with my improvement in these categories.then i’ll go on to say what was hard in them that i found difficult. first i’ll start with focus and idea i think that i have improved on having clear focus. My focus was like the first paper karen dog wrote let’s just say it was all over the place.here is an example of my writing before
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I could feel the cold. I could feel it against my crestfallen face. I didn’t know if I was ready‚ ready to never see anything I love ever again. I stepped up into the cockpit of my bomber‚ a Matte Black Avro Lancaster with four propellers at the front. It was huge but it flew well and was hard to see against the backdrop of the dark night sky. It had bombs stored in its metal hull and had guns at either end of it. I made a few swift movements. Flicking controls and pressing buttons‚ instantly
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dumpster with all the rancid smelling trash inside of it. I tucked my tail and tried to stay warm as I hid from the cars and those villainous humans walking past. As it got darker‚ I started to doze off. I tried to stay as awake and on guard as I could‚ but I was just so exhausted. I had been running around all day trying to find a safe place after I had finally escaped the dreadful place I was in‚ even though I left so many of my friends behind. I was woken up by the bright morning sun reflecting
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together. You can hear them begging for an end to their terror‚ and other are embracing the adrenaline‚ breaking out in hysterical‚ maniacal laughter. Lights flash in front of our faces‚ blinding us. At this point‚ my feet are dangling‚ and I am gripping onto the seat‚ a huge smile adorns my face. We are hurled into the air‚ spinning in large circles. The air smells like soft baked pretzels and cotton candy‚ mixed with the stink of sweat and sunscreen. Even whipping through the air‚ there is no missing
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My writing capabilities‚ when writing about things like emotions‚ fall within the limits of those that I love. I could write novels about my mother’s strength or my sister’s dedication or even one about my cat’s eating habits‚ but when I’ve been asked to write about myself‚ I never can. For a lack of a more scholarly word choice‚ I see difficulty in talking about myself or my qualities without feeling as if I have an extremely inflated sense of self. I tend to keep to myself and while to my innermost
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piece of work to do‚ even in kindergarten‚ I would always try to challenge myself; writing more then I was supposed to‚ having the neatest paper in the class‚ finishing ahead of time‚ or just creating more work for myself. Now‚ as I’ve gotten older‚ that interested hasn’t gone away. Still to this day‚ I find myself doing extra problems in my math book in an attempt to learn more ways how to solve the problem‚ or writing an extra version of an essay to see which one had the better literary layout. I’ve
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Personally‚ I am powerless to act on the matter. A single man’s rebellion is more often than not a failed rebellion‚ and though there are others who have views similar to my own‚ I fear that none of us are quite brave enough to take decisive actions‚ especially extreme ones. The thing is‚ if enough of an uproar was raised‚ the law could be repealed‚ yet what next? Would a war come from such actions? It’s definitely possible
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Park. The wooden planks at my back are faded from a combination of sun and sea-breeze‚ and under my fingers are lover’s carvings. Names‚ initials‚ crooked hearts‚ equations that end in forever. The last time I was here‚ I was eighteen. Maybe back then‚ I would have seen the beauty in it all. Right now‚ I pass my fingers over the gouges in the wood and hope I don’t get a splinter. I sigh softly‚ leaning forward and hanging my head. One hand dangles between my knees‚ my fingers twitching gently; the
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the building and open the door. I stand at the “genkan‚” to remove my shoes first. (A “genkan” is a traditional Japanese entryway area or entrance hall for a house‚ having the same level to the outside‚ something of a combination of a porch and doormat.) I step up onto the raised floor‚ and again bend down to face my shoes to the door‚ as the custom is‚ and perhaps for a quick exit later‚ if necessary. Adjacent to the wall on my right‚ there is a shelf called a “getabako‚” a small cabinet in which
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As I look up things about my personality type I find that it suits me very well. I am similar to ISTP types because I like to pull things apart and try to put them back together. As I read through thing I find that ISTP type like to change things u a lot when they are working or they will get bored. I have the same problem unless the task changes every time that I do it then there is no point in doing it. I don’t think that my career path that I started on was the best choice for me. I hope that
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