with my classmates has helped my writing and me in many ways. The peer editing comments help me know what to change in my writing. When I read and hear other classmate’s essays and journals it gives a lot of information that I didn’t even know. When peer editing‚ it helps me understand what people think about my writing and how they think I can make it better. The comments that are given to me by the editor tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling
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The song‚ Make Your Beginning‚ You Who Sing‚ which is a song of the Aztec nobility spoke to me muck like many works of lyric I listen to today. One for example is called‚ Can’t Complain by a band called Relent K. Each have the same basic message‚ which is do not worry about wordily things‚ just life life to the fullest because we do not live long. The song‚ Can’t Complain‚ focusses more on bad situations and telling the listeners how this person coped with the situation. Such as in the first few
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In her Ted Talk‚ “Your Body Language Shapes Who You Are‚” Dr. Amy Cuddy argues that how a person holds their body shapes how they act in situations. She starts off her speech offering everybody in the crowd a free no-tech life hack. She continues to talk about different ways of how people may be sitting‚ and the crowd reacts by changing their posture. Cuddy then continues on to describe to the crowd how the human race is fascinated with body language. She then puts up a few pictures on the board
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article “ No‚ You’re Not Entitled to Your Own Opinion”‚ Patrick Stokes suggests that while you can express an opinion‚ if you expect others to listen‚ you need to provide an informed argument. He describes Plato’s distinction between opinion or belief and knowledge. An opinion of personal preference is unarguable. However‚ a personal opinion on technical-based issues is sometimes confused with knowledge and is presented to others as an undeniable fact. In this case‚ amateurs think they have the right
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In This Is How You Lose Her by Junot Diaz‚ the main character Yunior indicates he is bad guy by materializing and objectifying the women that are in his life. While Yunior has been with several women throughout the book he indicates how he only is with some women for their appearance. While Yunior is in a relationship with Flaca for two years‚ it shows how he does not want anything serious with her as he says that he never “claimed” (Diaz 84) Flaca. Yunior says‚ “You were whitetrash from outside
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Should You Shoe Your Horse? Shoeing horses is a very controversial topic in the equestrian world. Many people believe that shoeing a horse is better because it protects their feet‚ and many others believe that keeping a horse barefoot is better because it lets the horse live a more natural life. I believe that keeping a horse barefoot is better for the horse and owner because it is less expensive‚ less can go wrong‚ and many horses don’t even need to be shod. Horses with shoes require much more
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Describe a moment in your life in which you experienced an epiphany Table of Contents Introduction 3 Cultural and Religious Difference that changed my perception 3 Political Environment in USA 3 Freedom of Living and expression 4 Conclusion 4 Introduction Some instances happen in life suddenly change the perception towards life and reality. I also experienced such an incident in my life that entirely changed my view and thinking towards US Natives. Then‚ I realized the difference
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Have You Lost Your Nut Graph? If you have‚ then I know a way you can get it back. On the other hand‚ if you don’t know what a nut graf is‚ you wouldn’t know that you had never had it in the first place‚ right? A nut graf‚ is a concise‚ catchy‚ sharp‚ and highly targeted opening sentence‚ designed to grab your readers’ attention instantly and to hook them to your post. In journalism this first‚ catchy‚ highly targeted opening sentence is called a nut graf (graph)‚ and is a summary of‚ or the
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Azraf Chowdhury VIII (Sunshine) What do you hope to achieve in your lifetime? According to my religious beliefs‚ life is eternal but not this one. Comparing the span of this life with my afterlife is a lot like comparing a millisecond to a millennium. Even this comparison is inadequate for the span of my afterlife. Nonetheless the time to achieve something great in this life‚ only if God keeps me alive and healthy to an approximate age of my country’s life expectancy‚ is supplementary. The things
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Responsibility? How does one become fat? Is it the lack of responsibility of one’s actions to make healthy food choices‚ the lack of knowledge to know if something is healthy or unhealthy for your body‚ or television hypnotizing the viewer into buying an unhealthy product? According to surgeon general‚ obesity has become a health epidemic that needs to be controlled and prevented. Almost a third of America’s population is obese and growing. Obesity is also now a wide spread topic that has caught the attention
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