the editor tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling mistake you have made‚ so you can change it. I believe that when you peer edit‚ it helps to make your writing that is the best. It also help you learn how to write better sentences and helps you see if the reader understands your point or you need to explain it in another way. When we peer edit multiple times‚ you get to know the opinion of more than one person on your writing. That helps me
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agree with others Say “No‚thank you!” Don’t slouche and have poor posture Stand up for what you believe in Have a well paced speech. Be firm and in control don’t be aggressive Being assertive will show your peers that you don’t want do drugs‚ and they should stop asking. Want Help? Here are some help lines to contact and call if you need help. Kids Help Phone www.kidshelpphone.ca/ 1-800-688-6868 Alcoholics Anonymous http://www.aa.org 905-522-8399 Drug
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If we never learned from our mistakes then the light in this room would never have been made by Thomas Edison’s awareness of the mistakes he was making he learned what not to do and then eventually made this happen. Lights on Hi I’m --------- and I like to learn from my mistakes‚ instead of bringing myself down‚ and I’d like to inspire you to do the same thing I’m going to tell you: why not learning from your mistakes is such a problem‚ show you some ways how to learn from your mistakes‚ and
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achieve. The first is to find out who killed Wellington‚ the neighbor’s dog‚ whom Christopher cared for. The second one is to find his mother‚ whom he had always thought was dead. In order to find who murdered the dog and his mother‚ Christopher must do many things that terrify him. Therefore‚ he becomes a heroic character because he faces his fears to achieve his goals. Christopher like dogs‚ Wellington‚ his neighbor Mrs. Shears’ dog‚ has been killed. Christopher is sad‚ and because of his poor communication
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We Learn From Those Closest to Us “You will never truly understand something until it happens to you.” My mother says. Yeah‚ yeah I get it. Until you put yourself in someone else’s shoes you know what they have gone through. That’s not what I’ve thought of until something really happened to me. See‚ I’ve never met my father. I’ve always asked her why I don’t ever get to see him and why she doesn’t ever talk about him. When I was a little girl‚ she told me not to talk to any boys. Why? Because boys
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Lessons We Don’t Learn: A Study of the Lessons of Disasters‚ Why We Repeat Them‚ and How We Can Learn Them On February 23‚ 2006‚ in a press conference to release the White House report on lessons learned from Hurricane Katrina‚ Assistant to the President for Homeland Security and Counterterrorism Frances Townsend said “[The president] demanded that we find out the lessons‚ that we learn them and that we fix the problems‚ that we take every action to make sure America is safer‚ stronger and better
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“Are We Born With Our Sexual Identity or Do We Choose It?” Sociology research paper Are you born with your sexual identity or do you choose it ? Identifying your sexual identity comes from a very young age. It starts when you first discover your genitals at months of you being born. Then you chose whether you want to play with stereotyped toys that are identified for boys or girls. After that‚ you learn gender role behavior‚ where you either do things “that boys do” or “that girls do”. Another
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In spite of an expression of defeat‚ what is the predominant emotional tone of the poem? O wild West Wind‚ thou breath of Autumn’s being‚ Thou‚ from whose unseen presence the leaves dead Are driven‚ like ghosts from an enchanter fleeing‚ Yellow‚ and black‚ and pale‚ and hectic red‚ Pestilence-stricken multitudes: O thou Who chariotest to their dark wintry bed The winged seeds‚ where they lie cold and low‚ Each like a corpse within its grave‚ until Thine azure sister of the
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“Greed” and “Crooks” are a sampling of comments recorded on a rendering of Lehman’s chief executive Richard Fuld by artist Geoffrey Raymond‚ who placed his painting outside of Lehman’s New York City offices and handed out markers to employees and pedestrians so they could write a message regarding the firm’s announcement that it was filing for bankruptcy. On September 15‚ 2008‚ financial services firm Lehman Brothers filed for bankruptcy with the U.S. Bankruptcy Court in the Southern District
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Do we love our pets too much? My ten year old pitbull mix was having problems with her hips. She barely got up‚ but when she did‚ she would skid on the floor. From doing so‚ she had scrapped off a piece of her skin on her forearm. It got infected after we would clean it and wrapping the wound‚ she wouldn’t stop opening it. She eventually couldn’t get up anymore. We all knew it was her time to go. According to Burkhard Bilger in his essay “The Last Meow” in the New Yorker‚ he explained what people
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