Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! *Strengths of the essay: Hi‚ Britanny. My name is Kathleen‚ and I am going to help you strengthen your essay. Let’s get started. A major strengh
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Final Essay Fact Pattern Throughout the over-the-top case of Professor Frieda Speak and President Smacksem‚ several legal issues were persistent in the lawsuit. However‚ Professor Speak attempted to bring a lawsuit on several issues where President Smacksem has done no wrong. These issues pertain to his Easter display‚ his prayer breakfast‚ and several aspects of the bill that he promoted with Senator Tellinemwhatodo. The first issue that Professor Speak had was with the display that President
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Peggy Orr Professor Knight Art History April 12‚ 2009 Ringgold’s Story Quilts Faith Ringgold’s artwork on her quilts is not only beautiful but literally tells stories. Ringgold began her artistic career more than 35 years ago as a painter. Today‚ she is best known for her painted story quilts -- art that combines painting‚ quilted fabric and storytelling. She has exhibited in major museums in the USA‚ Europe‚ South America‚ Asia‚ Africa‚ and the Middle
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because most people could not read. They were passed on by “shopes” The author is unknown and yet within this very long poem we are introduced to: Beowulf a hero who is intelligent‚ brave‚ and strong where good verses evil. Beowulf a man of faith and where he gets his strength and guidance from. “the Great placed complete trust/ in his strength of limb in the Lords favor. (H.669-670) Beowulf is an Epic Hero for he travels from Geatland to the Danes. Beowulf goes to Hrothgar’s aid. For
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Unit 6 Assignment- Identify the Legal Issue(s) and Statement of Facts December 19‚ 2010 Introduction to Legal Analysis Writing PA205 Holly Ewell Unit 6 Assignment Issues: - Does a valid contract exist between Mr. Lotts and Mr. Bibe? - Is Mr. Bibe bound by the contract he entered into with Mr. Lotts? - Was Mr. Bibe intoxicated when he signed the purchase agreement to buy Mr. Lotts’s coffee shop? - Did Mr. Lotts commit fraud against Bibe by purchasing alcohol prior to the contract agreement
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corporal punishment in the school system become abuse‚ we need remember it is a very thin line. If we are ever to turn toward a kindlier society and a safer world‚ a revulsion against the physical punishment of children would be a good place to start. - Dr. Spock Corporal punishment in schools occurs when the teacher or the "adult-in-charge" purposely inflicts pain upon a child in order to stop that child’s unacceptable behavior and/or inappropriate language. It is also used to prevent the child from
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The latest Report to the Nations On Occupational Fraud and Abuse‚ the biennial study of global fraud by the Association of Certified Fraud Examiners‚ finds that organizations lose an average of 5 percent of revenues to fraud each year‚ with a median loss of $140‚000. However‚ just over one-fifth of fraud schemes results in losses topping $1 million. Perhaps even more disturbing was the median length of time before the frauds were detected: 18 months. And‚ that’s not all; the study found that almost
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The Boy and His Family Relationships In a sort of short story style‚ Marie Howe illustrates a depleting family relationship between a father and his children in the poem‚ “The Boy‚” through its many symbols. With no discernible rhyme scheme‚ the plot develops‚ climaxes‚ and concludes alluding to a short story but in poetic form. The speaker‚ discovered through clues within the poem‚ is the younger sister of the boy and she is listening and learning from the examples set by her brothers. There is
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A journey to faith Time to be free. To let it go. To believe that the impossible had occurred‚ in an instant God’s healing power had changed my life forever. Overcome by the Blood of the Lamb and the Word of Our Testimony – everyone overcome. I had overcome‚ he had overcome for me‚ the Lamb‚ the one who sacrificed it all on that cross. To delight in you now‚ to rejoice let your name resound‚ is all I long for Lord‚ King of the Clouds. I worship You now. I stand in adoration... I lift my hands
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more powerful " . Naturally Boys feel the need to assert their power to others at an early age. Rick Moody’s short story "Boys"‚ shows us the relationships between brother and sister and then between the boys and their father. Boys in early ages can be very ruthless and reckless. In Rick Moody’s "Boys"‚ the power of masculinity takes over the boys lives and through tragedy the boys are able to come together and let down their guard. In the early stages of the boys lives they feel the need to show
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