6.10 Document for Analysis – Poorly Written E-Mail Message‚ p. 141 Your task. Study the following message. In teams or in class discussion‚ list at least five specific weaknesses. If your instructor directs‚ revise to remedy flabby expressions‚ long lead-ins‚ there is/are fillers‚ trite business expressions‚ clichés‚ slang‚ buried verbs‚ lack of parallelism‚ and general wordiness. Look for ways to improve readability with bulleted or numbered points. To: Marcy Love <marcy.love@sokia
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Example of a Poorly Written Report “Loose Bolts?” February 30‚ 1973 The film "Loose Bolts?" is an analysis of what became known as the Lordstown syndrome by business week magazine. Interviews with workers‚ foremen‚ and union officials in this film show how a bored and dissatisfied works turns out cars (Chevy Vega’s) with major flaws. I recommend this film to anyone interested in the study of worker attitudes. - Paul Marshall‚ Professor of Management‚ Harvard Business School
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George Orwell’s 1946 essay ‘Why I Write’ is enshrined with a set of innate values adhered to and advocated by Orwell himself. In recounting his personal journey in becoming a writer‚ Orwell enlists the underlying ideals justifying his initial motives for writing. Subsequently‚ it is the representation of deeply held ideals such as the innate personal connection to writing‚ the impact of context on a writer‚ the value of writing and the reasons for writing that captivate audiences and underpin the
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http://www.dnaindia.com/analysis/standpoint-gender-stereotyping-in-indian-recruitment-advertising-1994209 Rationale: For my written task 1 I have decided to write an opinion column based on the topic “Gender Inequality” to the public and the readers with the writing style of the author. I chose to write an opinion column from an article which talks about how woman are showed unimportant compared to men in advertisements. I chose to write on this topic because I feel that gender inequality is a major
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By Gulnari Giunashvili Glk.giunashvili@gmail.com 02.11.14 Country of Georgia in its Golden Age In XII-XIII centuries Georgia (in native language “Sakartvelo”) began to shape into centralized state and achieved highest level of its economical‚ social‚ political and cultural development. This period was named by the Georgian historians as The Georgian Golden Age. It starts with King David the Builder and his clever political tactics. (1) In 1099 King David took an advantage of Crusade and stopped
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Written Task 2 – Text Shame by Dick Greggory This essay will discuss an episode from the autobiography by Dick Gregory‚ Nigger (1964)‚ entitled Shame. Here‚ the author talks about one of the most important lessons he learned during his childhood: the world is not equal to everyone‚ and does this by telling his experiences lived in his school and neighborhood‚ all with the aim to present the difficulties that he and his social group faced during the forties in the United States. Using this
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My Favorite Song Folsom Prison Blues is the best country song ever written‚ and performed perfectly by the late Johnny Cash. Country music generally speaks from the heart‚ and Folsom Prison Blues is no exception. People relate to country music because there are usually references to common events and experiences we all share. The often heard adage‚ “three chords and the truth” is typically how country music is defined. Since truer words have never been spoken‚ Folsom Prison Blues is the embodiment
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My Country – Dorothea Mackellar My Country is an iconic nationalistic poem about Australia written by Dorothea Mackellar in 1908. Dorothea Mackellar was born in Sydney in 1885. Her education was comprised of private home tutoring until she attended University of Sydney. She travelled broadly with her parents and also become fluent in Spanish‚ French‚ German and Italian. She highly educated and lived an adventurous life. Though raised in a professional urban family‚ Mackellar’s poetry is usually
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Homesafe Ltd. Written Analysis and Communication Instructor: Dr. Seema Khanvilkar Submitted By: Apurv Jain‚ D023 Shreyansh Jain‚ D027 Mohit Sejwal‚ D055 Vinay Pal‚ D045 Sahil Bhavnani‚ D006 Aman Jakhar‚ D030 Letter of Transmittal To‚ Dr. Seema Khanvilkar‚ Business Communication Faculty‚ SBM‚ NMIMS – Mumbai Date: 4th March
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Essay How is an Australian Voice transgressed through the texts studied? The Australian voice is highlighted extensively throughout the inspirational texts‚ this creates credibility therefore helps the composers shape ideals. This is shown in the poem My Country composed by Dorothea Mackellar and in the visually stimulating urban poem‚ William Street written by Kenneth Slessor. Kenneth Slessor’s
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