sitting around trying to figure out who I actually thought I was. I wrote about 3 rough drafts before deciding on how I was going to present myself. After finally liking one draft‚ I did numerous amounts of editing. The editing process was difficult for me because I did not want to mess up my very first essay and make a bad first impression. Revising the essay was much simpler with help from peers. The benefits of using a formatted writing process are ultimately what lead to my higher grade. This process
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Super Size Me does a great job of putting into picture the daily abuse of fast food by Americans. The title Super Size Me refers to the super size option available at McDonald’s. Shorty after the movie released in 2004‚ McDonald’s discontinued the super size option. This movie reveals surprising statistics about fast
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in our lives and the direction of our lives are going. Some lead us in a good way‚ and others lead us toward a long‚ hard way. A few people have guided me astray from my path and have lead me to trouble. A majority of people I know who are more active in my life‚ have been the ones helping me find my path to success once again and try to make me stay there. I feel that most of the people on my life have lived by this quote from the Dalai Lama‚ "Our prime purpose in this life is to help others. And
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Writing is a way to express oneself and provide knowledge to the reader. Different forms of writing include poems‚ journals‚ and essays. However‚ over my years of being in school‚ writing has seemed to be an un-bearable chore to me. I didn’t grow as a writer and never will either. When I moved to Miami‚ Florida from Haiti at age six‚ I knew I would have to learn a whole new language to graduate through school and communicate with people. I started first grade in the middle of the year‚ while still
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Good morning/afternoon Grade 9 Students and Mr Cooper. The documentary that I will be analysing is Super-Size Me‚ directed by Morgan Spurlock who focuses this film on the fast-food franchise McDonalds‚ which the director must diet exclusively on for an entire month‚ three times a day to study the diet’s effect on his body. The purpose of Super-Size Me is to inform people about how significant it is to be more conscious of the foods they eat‚ and the possible consequences that they may risk undertaking
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As a college student bad writing is no stranger to me. On my journey to become a great writer I have made many mistakes and you should as well. No Author writes a perfect story the first time‚ It takes a great deal of revision and hours of word choice to make sure the reader comprehends what is intended to be narrated. This can be very difficult and has been for me as a young writer. George Orwell talks about many different examples of bad writing and what makes this writing so bad such as complex
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Taylor‚ Alec Per.2 From the Author Assignment Hi my names Rudolfo Anaya‚ and I am the author of the story Bless Me‚ Ultima‚ and I would like to answer some commonly asked questions about this story. I will answer questions numbered 8 and 10 today. First‚ Antonio believes that the best god will be a woman because He thinks that she would forgive easier. This matters to Antonio because at this point in his life he realized that his own three brothers are major sinners‚ and spend a lot of
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Andres Ramos Dana Hatter December 1‚ 2012 Super Size Me is a movie about the documentary‚ producer and director Morgan Spurlock‚ the film is based on research that occurs from the question‚ does fast food really covers the nutritional needs and requirements to stay healthy. During the course of the film‚ Spurlock for 30 days consumes fast food products from McDonalds. Before beginning‚ the investigation Spurlock is curious to know what his consequences would be. Therefore‚ he visits several specialists
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Black Like Me is about a middle aged white man living in Texas in the late 50’s and early 60’s. He is deeply committed to the cause of racial injustice. He decides to temporarily become a black man and sets out to explore the racial injustice a African American deals with on a daily basis. After this experiment he realizes that racism is a result of social condition‚ and not any inherent quality within blacks or whites. He pleads for tolerance and understanding between the races. The author and
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know negativity will be in every corner of my path. I have also learned to not let that negativity effect me. I’ve made mistakes and learned my lesson. To me mistakes are something to be thankful for‚ because everything that life gives you‚ is either a blessing or lesson learned. Growing up I could consider myself “lucky” not by wealth but by the people who have always supported me. Family‚ to me plays one of the most important roles in my life; I know that no matter what I have a family to fall back
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