It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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Amsterdam To gain a strong understanding of the Dutch culture and lifestyles‚ you should definitely visit Amsterdam. You will be amazed by the large number of bicycles‚ stunned to see the culture and the architecture and be surprised of the smell of tulips. It is also the city for shopaholics and fashion lovers. But the most famous area would definitely be the red- light district‚ also known as the Wallen. When you are there you will be surprised to see the vast offers of legalized prostitution
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Since I have decided to become a better volleyball player‚ I will condition and study the sport. First‚ every day I will go to the gym‚ run for fifteen minutes to help with my endurance and lift weights every other day‚ such as squatting and deadlifting. By going to the gym‚ it will help me to keep up with my more advanced volleyball friends during long rallies and long games. In order to help with my volleyball skills‚ I plan on going to local San Jose open gyms. At the open gyms‚ I will focus on
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Learning through Experience Filled with eye-opening and complex ideas‚ Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse highlights the life of a man striving to achieve peace and enlightenment. Starting out as a boy‚ Siddhartha started as a Brahman‚ to a Samana‚ to a merchant‚ and finally to a ferryman. Many life lessons can be uncovered from the life of Siddhartha. Blazoned through the journey of Siddhartha‚ SIddhartha learns the life lessons of being grateful‚ learning from oneself and past mistakes‚ and learning how
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Students should not attend school year-round. Keeping schools open year-round would have negative consequences. For example‚ it would cost extra money to keep schools open for the year. District 39 would have to reorganize its budget in order to keep up with year-round school. This is because the district would have to pay to keep school services functioning‚ such as clubs‚ buses‚ school lunch‚ and electricity just to name a few. It would cost a lot of money to keep the entire building air-conditioning
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have the Freedom of Food Choice. In 2012‚ the United States Department of Agriculture. established new laws to help increase the nutritional value of food in school lunches. Today many students are disagreeing with this new healthy food act because they aren’t receiving the amount of calories needed to go through an entire day. Different school districts are trying to establish new policies in order to give students the amount of energy they need as well as the nutritional values of the food their
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High School Musical Critic Essay The movies are very good movies‚ though the movie‚ aiming towards children of age four to twelve‚ encouraging them into having love affair to early at their stage in life. I believe the movie should focus on the age bracket of fifteen (15) through age twenty-two (22). The establishing shot in this film is key as it gives the audience an indication of the setting. The various shots give the audience an insight to the characters’ surroundings which makes the film seem
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application essays. Essays copied in whole or in part from these samples or any other applicant’s work will be rejected and may result in disciplinary action. Essay #1 Score: 4.0 For as long as I can remember I’ve known what I wanted to do with my life. Science has always been a passion of mine‚ and medicine in particular has interested me for some time. Dedicating my life to improving the lives of others is very appealing to me. After Michigan State‚ I plan on advancing to medical school to become
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americans are so serious about holidays. I chose Halloween and its origins‚ because I decided that it was the only
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Understanding Why Black Kids Sit Together in the Cafeteria In her article “Why Are All the Black Kids Sitting Together in the Cafeteria?” Beverly Daniel Tatum argues the reason behind cafeteria separation throughout schools in America (P.376). One of the reasons she mentions is that students (primarily of the African American descent) are unsure of who they are‚ so they clique up with fellow classmates they feel they can relate to. Like students of the same racial background as them‚ or students
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