a) Comments about your two essays: • Which Essay was harder to write? Why? Writing the first (UC Personal Statement) essay was harder‚ because in the first draft I completely went off-topic. Before my professor’s review‚ I thought it would be a perfect essay but it was not good. I wrote a lot about my achievements but those achievements were not reflecting my personal and professional images to a reader. After the review and suggestion‚ I definitely found my way to develop topic concise and related
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Alex Mendieta October 18‚ 2012 English Composition I (Th-8-12 p.m.) The Mona Lisa “The Mona Lisa that has influenced the way I view the world and myself‚ and a description of itself” This essay I will describe the Mona Lisa‚ its influence on the world and me. In order to do this I will first describe the Mona Lisa in an aesthetic and historic term. Next I will describe the ways that has influenced my view of the world. Finally I will discuss how it will affect my life and me. The first
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hormonal changes that adolescents undergo. That is why adolescents many times act like children—they cannot help but follow their impulses without giving a thought on what the consequences might be. In the movie Billy showed impulsive tendencies. For example‚ when he was allowed to steer the boat he endangered himself and steers the boat in a high speed. Cognition
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Yourself in My Shoes" "Put Yourself in My Shoes" is one of the longest and most complex stories in the collection‚ and one of its finest. In addition‚ it brings together a number of the themes and images that have recurred throughout the book. For example‚ it depicts the kind of interaction between two couples that we have seen in "Neighbors" and "What’s in Alaska?"; in this case‚ the Myerses go to visit the Morgans‚ whose house they had lived in for a year while Professor Morgan and his wife were
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Acknowledging Female Stereotypes in Much Ado About Nothing Women in the Elizabethan age were extremely repressed and discriminated against. Most would not have gone to school or received any type of formal education. They were not allowed to vote‚ own property‚ or freely voice their opinions. They were seen as the property of a man‚ subject to his wants‚ needs‚ and not allowed to have their own; men held extremely stereotypical views of their female counterparts that helped them justify the way
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Reflective Introduction: What do you already know about writing? I still am a little nervous taking this class because the last writing class I took was in my senior year in high school. That was back in 2004. With that comes the challenge of remembering what I have learned in the past and translating it to this class. I remember back in high school when an essay is composed of three parts. An introduction‚ body‚ and a conclusion. With the introduction‚ it should grab the readers’ attention
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nice environment. These are just a few of the myriad reasons why zoos are good for animals. Normally people are against zoos because they think that animals do not have the correct living standards while in zoos‚ people think this because all we hear about zoos are negative things but if you took the time to delve deeper into this topic you will find out that zoos are an important part of today’s society and without them animals‚ science and human education would not be the same. Zoos provide as high
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is enveloped in the idea of complete power‚ but little do they know that everyone already possesses some form of power. Power can be viewed from a variety of different ways‚ and everyone should have their own type of power within themselves. For example‚ a stay-at-home mom is not going to have the same amount of power as the president‚ but they both possess a unique form of power in their own diverse lifestyles. A generic definition of the word power would be the ability to do something or act in
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Privacy Essay Of all the human rights in the global archive‚ confidentiality and privacy are conceivably the largest problematical human right in this era. Classification of privacy differs commonly by circumstance as well as locality. In countless diverse regions and cultures around the world‚ countries have involved the right and justification of privacy with data or information protection‚ which interprets privacy with reference to managing delicate information. Outside these strict contexts
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either. Overall the essay was not hard to write about there were just a few little mistakes I had along the way that made it complicated. My main problem was trying to make my definition interesting enough and giving it enough claim. Writing on love was a great idea‚ but I could just not figure out a way to make my definition broad enough. It also was not easy trying to make a definition of love in my own words without looking it up first. After I sat and put some thought in about what love was to me
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