or facts not otherwise connected. Stating the main idea in a single sentence (often called a topic sentence) will help you achieve unity. * If the sentences follow the thesis sentence. If you are talking about school don’t talk about summer‚ continue on the path about talking about school. Coherence: The quality that enhances the flow of your writing. Coherence is the principle that all parts of a piece of writing should stick together‚ or cohere. When a piece of writing is coherent‚
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Essay 1: Descriptive Essay of a Beautiful Friend of Mine Helen Keller once said that “the best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched‚ they must be felt with the heart”. How is that even possible when you know someone that has been with you since the day you have met them‚ the person that considers you a friend but you consider them as something more than just friend sometimes‚ just sometimes. Having mixed feelings about someone that you know makes you sit and stare
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Descriptive writing – English Dubai has the tallest buildings and the largest malls‚ in the night the sparkly skies make me exited like a small child that has sweets‚ it is the city that never sleeps. At night the moment that the fireworks will bursts in the clear black sky‚ the people were on every Spot on the ground they were like the sun’s rays in summer. Suddenly I can see lime green rockets zooming it to a pitch black sky‚ amongst the twinkling white stars. Everyone looked incredibly amazed
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Robert Campbell Mrs. Overly ENGL 1301.54 11/1/2005 Assignment: Ch.3. Descriptive Writing—“The Body Farm” p.139‚ #1. Write an essay in which you describe something that most people would find repulsive or frightening. Skydiving It was an ordinary day in June when a few friends and I decided that we wanted to do something that we thought was exhilarating‚ so we went skydiving. What is skydiving you might ask yourself? Skydiving is exactly what it sounds like‚ the act of jumping or falling
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My Descriptive Essay “My hidden castle” When I was younger there was a place I used to go when I was sad‚ angry‚ or confused. I went there often. It was a rather large castle hidden on an Island and surrounded by a forest. It was where I felt safe. This was my hideaway when I was in foster care; somewhere I could go to when things got to be too much for me. The castle was a two story building that covered most of the island‚ apart from the forest that surrounded it. The caste was made of stone
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Aidan Stacey Descriptive essay Blurred by the rush I wait Sitting slouched on an alumium bench ‚ head down. As all mall benches‚ it lacks a back support. People say this is because many mall owners don’t want people sitting around too long. They want them Browsing and buying. As I lifted my head my pupils dilate to see all that was going on. There is plenty of noise‚ light and boisterous behaviour. It is ludacris ‚ controlled chaos. My attention is caught by a struggling mother with crows eye
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Descriptive Essay Final Draft In the United States there are a lot of hair styles that are extremely popular. Some women prefer a more comfortable or casual style that is easy to do in a hurry. While other women prefer a fashionable hair style. Sometimes it’s just easier to do a casual look while in a hurry or running late. There are Up-Do’s‚ Comfortable styles and styles for special occasions such as weddings and high school proms
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Descriptive Writing She is a beautiful young woman‚ perhaps the most beautiful woman he has ever seen. Her hair is a midnight black color; it almost reminded him of the color of the night sky as he looks through a window. As he looked at her hair he notice the way the light catches in it and it shimmers as it flows with her every move. His eyes are drawn to the fact that her hair is very lengthy reaching down to the middle of her torso‚ so long in fact that it almost caresses the small of her back
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Descriptive Essay Italy‚ a gorgeous country shaped like a boot‚ is one of the most beautiful places one can visit. I recently vacationed in Italy‚ and never gave my eyes the chance to take a break from the beautiful scenery: from the ongoing gorgeous landscape to the remarkable architecture. My family and I really enjoyed our little time in Italy‚ between visiting our loud and obnoxious extended family to tasting and smelling amazing Italian cuisine. Vacationing in a different country is a remarkable
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DESCRIPTIVE WRITING Beads of sweat trickled down my face as the sweltering sun continued to beat on down on me. The waves crashing rhythmically on the shore were tempting me to enter those enticing waters to cool off. But‚ no. I could not. I was here for a job. A job that needed me to stand here with my heavy makeup bag and watch others have a dip in the cool waters while being photographed and filmed. I turned round and ‘people-watched’ the by-standers who were here at the beach for a nice
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