First of all‚ I would like to say that you have an overall good paper in my opinion. The first thing that I can suggest is a better hook. My attention wasn’t drawn into the paper. I suggest a quote by a scientist or other survivor‚ and/or a statistic – something that will make a reader think about the paper more. Another thing that I can recommend is to add a little bit more background on the two narratives‚ but just very brief (a couple sentences). Also I’d like to point out some things that you
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The Second Reich Revision sheet. 1. The Constitution – Position of Chancellor independent to Reichstag. Power structure unclear and confused. 2. Economy – G. Europe’s industrial superpower‚ built on existing industries and new ones. (new – electrics‚ chemicals‚ cars‚ precision equipment) 3. Labor force – Population growing also change of jobs from agriculture to tertiary sectors. Also G. Best education system for scholors and technical skills. 4. Changing spirit of the age: new
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Dear Journal‚ Last time I wrote was when I was leaving to go into battle. So much has happened since then – I don’t know where to start! I will begin with the battle. It was a difficult battle with many twists and turns along way‚ and just when we thought we had victory in our court‚ some more fighting broke out. Throughout the battles I stayed strong and confident‚ even when everyone was looking down. I managed to kill the traitor‚ Macdonwald‚ and was then informed that anymore traitor will
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ENTRY 1 After days of travelling‚ I have finally arrived at France. I have found France to be much more pleasant than Thornfield; here‚ I have no commitments and am free to do whatever I please. However‚ acting on impulse has always been one of my greatest flaws. Last night‚ when I attended ________’s dinner party‚ I came across a fair young lady‚ __________. I struck up a conversation with her and found her to be similar to other ladies. Upon first glance‚ she seemed to be charming and smart‚
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Coach always says that offense sells tickets but‚ defense always wins games. I always wondered what she meant by that until we played our 1st game and‚ I experienced what it would feel like if we would not have played any defense. They grabbed offensive board after offensive board and never once did we box out. The other team looked like all-stars playing against us but never once did we all stop to think about what our coach told us until halftime. We all went in the locker room and contemplated
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Diary of Wimpy Kid Evaluative Essay San Diego Christian College Children’s Literature Abstract The Diary of a Wimpy kid is a book about adolescence who have dealt with emotional struggles and social acceptance in middle school. The book highlighted areas of struggle which included: bullies‚ emotional responses in both positive and negative ways‚ friendship‚ and family dynamics. The book was intended was readers of age seven and older but could be used a discussion book with children
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Use a Diary System Understand a Diary System 1. Explain the purpose of using a diary system. There are many purposes to using a diary system‚ one main purpose is to efficiently and effectively manage and utilise every minute of the working day by being able to see what meetings are coming up‚ what preparation time is available and to look back and see how much time was spent during the day on what topics/meetings. 2. Describe different types of diary systems. There are several different
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RATIONALE I wrote a diary about Bernard and his feelings for Lenina in the World State. It was written with an informal tone and hopes to address the school student’s audience. In my diary‚ I tried to use informal phrases like “I feel bad‚ worse than ever”‚ “I´m angry and frustrated” and “I´m tired and I need to sleep”. I tried as well to use an easy level of vocabulary with word choices like “beautiful” and “emotion” for the people to understand clearly what I want to express. By using these elements
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tomorrow!). These are the inner thoughts of some women on a daily basis and in Bridget Jones ’s Diary; Helen Fielding makes single women feel like they are not alone. Through incidents of self doubt‚ heartache‚ and the anxiety of being single forever‚ Fielding allows readers who have faced or are facing the same situations to take a break‚ sit back and have a laugh at Bridget ’s expense. Bridget Jones ’s Diary is a story about the life of a girl determined to have it all. Bridget is the thirty-something
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India prevail over Pakistan in a nail biter The 3rd and the last one-day international between India and Pakistan played on 6th January‚ 2013 in New Delhi finally gave the Indian supporters a reason to celebrate. In a low scoring game‚ India(167 all out) beat Pakistan(157 all out) by 10 runs to prevent a white wash in the 3 match series. Pakistan defeated India in the previous two ODIs and were all set to clean sweep the series. India won the toss and decided to bat first but the poor batting
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