It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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After reading the article “Don’t Post About Me on Social Media‚ Children Say” by KJ Dell’Antonia parents and children claim that posting pictures and videos of them without permission is wrong. I somewhat disagree with this article because I think that there are many ways that the account owner can make their account private and control who can view their photos. In the first place‚ when the parents click to confirm their accounts‚ they are letting the owners of that website to make them go public
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What is community? The term community is a group of interacting people‚ living in some proximity. Community usually refers to a social unit larger than a household that shares common values and has social cohesion. Community is a large group of people helping each other and benefiting from each other. Saint Jude Community refers to the students helping each other‚ and students working together in order to improve themselves and help others to be one in serving the school. The students achieve this
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On the surface I think I am like most young and modern American women: I take school seriously‚ I have dreams and goals for the future that I am determined to make happen‚ and I don’t expect anyone to do the hard work for me. I come from what is an increasingly normal background: my parents are divorced and I live with my mom and sisters and only occasionally see my dad since he now lives on the other side of the country‚ but I still feel very lucky to have a supportive‚ if spread out‚ family behind
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Amsterdam To gain a strong understanding of the Dutch culture and lifestyles‚ you should definitely visit Amsterdam. You will be amazed by the large number of bicycles‚ stunned to see the culture and the architecture and be surprised of the smell of tulips. It is also the city for shopaholics and fashion lovers. But the most famous area would definitely be the red- light district‚ also known as the Wallen. When you are there you will be surprised to see the vast offers of legalized prostitution
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Since I have decided to become a better volleyball player‚ I will condition and study the sport. First‚ every day I will go to the gym‚ run for fifteen minutes to help with my endurance and lift weights every other day‚ such as squatting and deadlifting. By going to the gym‚ it will help me to keep up with my more advanced volleyball friends during long rallies and long games. In order to help with my volleyball skills‚ I plan on going to local San Jose open gyms. At the open gyms‚ I will focus on
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Learning through Experience Filled with eye-opening and complex ideas‚ Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse highlights the life of a man striving to achieve peace and enlightenment. Starting out as a boy‚ Siddhartha started as a Brahman‚ to a Samana‚ to a merchant‚ and finally to a ferryman. Many life lessons can be uncovered from the life of Siddhartha. Blazoned through the journey of Siddhartha‚ SIddhartha learns the life lessons of being grateful‚ learning from oneself and past mistakes‚ and learning how
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Media Should Be Fair In Political Issues In Malaysia ‘MEDIA SHOULD BE FAIR ABOUT POLITICAL ISSUES IN MALAYSIA’ UNIVERSITI TEKNOLOGI MARA FOUNDATION IN LAW (PI007) FACULTY OF LAW BEL342‚ ENGLISH TO ACADEMIC PURPOSES‚ SEMESTER 2‚ CLASS LWA02B MADAM HASNAH BT CHE ANI JANUARY 7‚ 2011 Introduction : The media are essential in the modern world of democracy because it can inform the people and influence their decisions in private and public life. It may also seek to lay down an agenda
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all but her face kept me glued to that page to figure it out. Furthermore‚ this specific advertisement reveals the message through its theme. It also has a variety of ways in how it attempts to sell the product and if I believe it is effective. This essay also goes into what kind of theme comes off from the advertisement. At a first glance of the picture‚ I’m almost certain that most consumers as well I had no clue what exactly the model was trying to sell. In an essence‚ you don’t really care what
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news articles involving deadly use of force; the media is quick to point out the race of the officer‚ the race of the suspect‚ and whether or not the suspect had a weapon.” says Josh Crosby author of the article Media Frenzy- Officer Safety Nightmare. Do you ever wonder why society is so hateful towards the police department when the police department is sometimes justified in their actions? The media has the power to sway the opinions of society about the police department because of the way they present
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