It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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Samples of descriptive paragraphs: Sample 1.The sample below is an opening paragraph from a student essay on the development of entertainment media. In it‚ she describes TV-watching in her family to make a point about how central TV was as a form of entertainment in the 60’s. (1) As I was growing up in the 60’s‚ television was the only entertainment my family knew of the electronic sort. (2) The 7 o’clock nightly news was such an important part of our family that my dad knocked a wall down and
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Hanna Emily (16613377) 1. USING PERSONAL EXAMPLE On July 18‚ 2013‚ I decided to continue my education in college. First of all I imagine that college would be a very enjoyable experience. Start of the orientation time‚ I tried to greet anyone who might be a good friends of mine later. This is very important because I live alone with no families in Bandung. The next day‚ the teaching-learning process begins. Teaching-learning process in college is much more different than Senior High School
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the line. a. CTRL c. ENTER b. ALT d. ESC REF: WD 7 4. Press the ENTER key in all of the following circumstances EXCEPT ____. a. to insert a blank line into a document b. when the insertion point reaches the right margin c. to begin a new paragraph d. in response to prompts in Word dialog boxes REF: WD 8 5. When Word flags a possible spelling or grammar error‚ it also changes the Spelling and Grammar Check icon to a(n) ____. a. black circle c. X b. green check mark d. red
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The truth about the first thanksgiving and the fact of monumental design The history of any country‚ presented as the history of a family. I am fascinating by the chapter-3 " The Truth About Thanksgiving day.After the new settlers established their county and started life in a few states like Florida new Mexico‚San Francisco‚and Arkansas. Moreover‚ These people introduce Spanish culture like horse‚ cattle‚sheep‚pigs‚ fishing‚ and basic element of cowboy culture including all it is vocabularies. I
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factory systems. During this time‚ products were made faster and more efficiently than ever. There was a huge need for steel‚ iron‚ cotton‚ and coal (Bentley‚ Ziegler pg. 654). In the beginning‚ Great Britain was the only place that had developed industrialization. It wasn’t until the nineteenth century that industries had caught on in places like France‚ Belgium‚ Germany‚ and the United States. Many European migrants were traveling to the United States at the time because they sought opportunities in
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Methods of Paragraph Development Methods of development are patterns of organization use to organize ideas about a topic. Although a lot of writing you will come across does not rely solely on one method of development‚ an understanding of these patterns will help you organize your ideas and get you writing more quickly. An understanding of different methods of development and when to use them can save you valuable time in starting and organizing your essay. Many‚ if not most‚ essays by professional
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that character(150 words)(Unit Seperately for Unit 1 And 2) 4. Prepare a chart using relevant pictures/slogans/quotations/proverbs Topic: Beat The Summer Heat(Roll No. 1-30) OR Social Networking(Roll No. 31-60) 5. Write a descriptive writing about your favourite advertisement which you watch on T.V. Use Relevant Pictures for the following. Also Include the following:- 1. What the product is 2. Description of the advertisement 3. Why do you like it 6. Write
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men were trained and put in to a fitness training to make them healthier and strong for and after the war. All of the men who came back are now remembered as heroes and honoured for there bravery and courage. Yes the government broke the promise about using conscription however the war was in our favour and families‚ friends‚ country were all saved and protected in the process. We have made a face on the earth and shown our power to all the countries out there and tell them to beware because we
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Essay about ME I was not thrust into this world with a silver spoon in mouth nor born with amazing talents wired into my DNA. No‚ instead I was given two amazing role models who have taught me hard work really does prosper in this world and that if I really want something bad enough I’m going to have to work at it hard enough. My parents have shown me that by their work ethic and lifestyle. My parents aren’t the only people in my life that have given me gifts that have built me to who I am today;
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