Writing Essay Evaluation Read the following TWO essays thoroughly. Decide which of them is more appropriate according to how a good essay should be. Essay (A) A Special Place 1 Sometimes‚ childhood memories come flooding in. I often drift back to my younger days spent in an old tree house. 2 Our tree house was a terrific place. It was built of discarded lumber and sat eight feet off the ground. It had various-sized fence posts for steps. A long‚ thick rope hung next to the steps. We used the rope
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Formal letter is a business or official letter. They are written to complaint or inform something. These letters include applications‚ letters to editors‚ official letters‚ letters to and from organizations‚ government departments etc. These letters have an objective or business-like style of writing. Points To Remember: 1. Mentioning the subject is a must in a formal letter. 2. The formal letter should be brief‚ simple and concise. 3. It should focus on the issue rather than dwindling on various
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combated suicide gave clear warning signs only to go unnoticed by their family and friends. Society is not good at providing the required resources for teens to use when they feel they need to no longer live. The reading I have chosen is “Falling in Place” by Eugene McNamara where a Chinese girl escape the hospital and committed suicide. Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary
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FORMAL WRITING Year 2 students should be using devices for their learning. (AGAINST) Young students‚ specifically Year 2 and younger‚ should not be using devices in their learning curriculum. While having devices and infinite knowledge at your fingertips can have its advantages‚ it also comes with many serious detriments that could cause many problems in the future‚ despite all the learning advantages you could think of. One of the many reasons to disapprove of the use of digital devices
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Chapter#2 “Hard Rock Café’s Global Strategy” Q1. Identify the strategy changes that have taken place at Hard Rock Café since its founding in 1971? Ans. Hard Rock Café has been serving food and rock music with enthusiasm since the opening of its first café in London in 1971.The strategy changes that have taken place are as follows: 1. Hard Rock introduced the concept of ‘experience economy’ to its café operations .The strategy was to incorporate a unique ‘experience’ into its operations which was
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FORMAL LETTER EXAMPLE Block 6 Avenue 35 #33-67 Hougang 89 Singapore 687909 23 March 2011 Mr John Teo Manager Mex Mall 41 Serangooon Central Singapore 780645 Dear Mr Teo‚ Proposal for a bookstore in Mex Mall I am a student from Maris Stella High School and I live in the Serangoon neighbourhood. In recent months‚ I have gone and shopped in Mex Mall that just opened. I realized that there is no bookstore although there are more than sixty shops. Without bookstores‚ people will
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90210 goes over many concepts of developmental psychology. I would rate the TV show an 8/10 because there are certain aspects of the show that are realistic to other teenagers. Still‚ there are many exaggerations to this show. To start off‚ Annie and Wilson are attending a new school‚ this causes anxiety for anyone. Making new friends‚ meeting new teachers and trying to belong is stressful for anyone. When Annie is introduced to her new class a student named George calls her a “narc”. This goes to
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Formal organization It is a fixed set of rules of infra-organization procedures and structures. As such‚ it is usually set out in writing‚ with a language of rules that ostensibly leave little discretion for interpretation. In some societies and in some organization‚ such rules may be strictly followed; in others‚ they may be little more than an empty formalism. * To facilitate the accomplishment of the goals of the organization: In a formal organization the work is delegated to each individual
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Keely and Du: ** IS THE STORY OF A PREGNANT RAPE VICTIM WHO IS KIDNAPPED BY A EXTREME PRO-LIFE ACTIVIST TO PREVENT HER FROM HAVING AN ABORTION. Characters: Du * 65 year old nurse who takes care of Keely in a house basement. * Is married to an army husband and had 3 kids with him‚ but he lost her only daughter when she was just a baby. * Keely replaces almost the daughter she wishes she had. Walter * Pastor in his fifties who belongs to a Christian pro-life group. * Blunt spoken
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Cri Du Chat syndrome is a rare chromosomal abnormality that affects an arm of chromosome number five. Other well-known names of the syndrome include; 5p minus‚ 5p monosomy‚ and Lejeune’s Syndrome. The words Cri Du Chat translate in French to “cry of the cat‚” this is referring to the distinct cry of children burdened by this disorder. When the deletion of the short arm on chromosome 5 occurs‚ multiple genes are also deleted. This deletion of genes can vary depending on how much of chromosome 5’s
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