help me know what to change in my writing. When I read and hear other classmate’s essays and journals it gives a lot of information that I didn’t even know. When peer editing‚ it helps me understand what people think about my writing and how they think I can make it better. The comments that are given to me by the editor tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling mistake you have made‚ so you can change it. I believe that when you peer edit‚ it
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“Obesity is high in this country for adults and children‚ and it has nothing to do with diet and the choice of food. Physicians must confront obesity where they can and not have the weight of the government on them as they do it” (Terry Bennet). When people talk about obesity‚ a lot of people agree that people have to change their diet‚ while on the other hand some people also believe that the government should be doing more to control what us as Americans consume. Before eating anything and possibly
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What Does Your Handwriting Say About You Good morning to all my fellow friends. Today‚ I’m going to talk about what your handwriting says about you. How you craft letters and words can indicate more than 5000 different personality traits. To introduce students to the field‚ graphologists have them write ‘she sells seashells by the seashore’ in cursive. Why cursive? Graphologists say it gives them a better read on a person. Try writing a same sentence now in cursive and see how graphologists might
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should always be the first criteria. This is because without love‚ I think that the couples will have a hard time tolerating with each other at the beginning of a marriage and quarrels would be very frequent. But with love‚ at least it will be more easier for each parties to tolerate due to the special bond shared between them. Moreover‚ love enable the couples to have happy moment with each other throughout the marriage. Compared to couples that just do not have the chemistry attraction between them
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April 2013 What Is Your Belief? Why does religion even exist? The most evident answer is that it actually serves human needs. The primary need is because we and our loved ones most die‚ and facing with that pain is something hard to deal with. People often go to religion for answers‚ or better yet something to lean on. Why wouldn’t you go to a “higher power” when you’re feeling lost and alone? I mean who wouldn’t pray to something or someone to make you feel better or better yet a
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What Have I Learned About Life When a person is born there is a really no end to the learning that occurs from that point forward. There are the learning basics that occur from birth to about eleven years old but after that it’s mostly just learning on your own. Parents do what they can to lead us in the right direction but ultimately it is our own decisions that determine the path of our lives. In my lifetime I personally have made a lot of mistakes and have learned a lot of lessons over the years
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What I have Learned about Me Patricia Zolocsik PSY/285 October 10‚ 2012 Darren Iwamoto What I have Learned about Me There are several things I have learned about myself during this course. Most I already knew about myself just did not know that there was specified names for my attributes. I have also learned how I can deal with my unique attributes to help me personally and professionally. A person is made up of many attributes‚ and no two people have exactly the same combinations
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“At Your Service” PM598 – October 2012 Johnny Sanders You are Chris and Pat Smith‚ entrepreneurs with five years of experience investing in small businesses. Eighteen months ago you decided to invest in a catering venture with two chefs‚ J. P. Martin and L. L. Miller‚ who have culinary science degrees and five years of work experience‚ which includes winning a prestigious prize in a gourmet food competition. Following some extended discussions‚ the four of you decided to set up a business
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“What You Eat Is Your Business‚” by Radley Balko In the article of Radley Balko‚ he considers obesity a problem in the nation. Balko believes that it is unhealthy for children to be eating bad food but it’s their choices to eat that food. Balko is saying that if people are eating unhealthy and are having health problems everyone shouldn’t have to pay for their health problems. Balko says‚ “In other words‚ bringing the government between you and your waistline.” Basically he is saying that the
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WHAT DO YOU LOOK FORWARD TO‚ AS YOU BEGIN THIS EDUCATIONAL EXPERIENCE AND YOUR PERSONAL SEARCH FOR PURPOSE? WHAT IS YOUR GREATEST FEAR?HOW CAN YOU OVERCOME IT?WRITE ABOUT ONE SPECIFIC EDUCATIONAL EXPERIENCE FROM YOUR PAST WHERE YOU ADDRESSED A FEAR AND OVERCAME IT AND HOW YOU SUCCEEDED IN THE PROCESS. I look forward to getting the best out of this online nursing program from Grand Canyon University and come out a better nurse equipped with the skill and the knowledge that I need to meet with the
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