* 1.Is my title and introduction enticing? * My title and introduction is in my opinion enticing. * 2.Is my thesis effective? * I believe that my thesis statement is very effective. * 3.Have I included enough details so the reader can visualize my experience? * The details included in my essay should give the reader a clear view on my experience. * 4.Are the events presented in a logical sequence? * The events included in my essay are presented in
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was born in Cuba in 1993 to two fifteen year olds Ariel Roman and Brudys Garcia. My mom at age fifteen was breastfeeding while her friends were graduating from high school. The first six years I lived in Cuba are a bur. In fact‚ I only remember holding my mothers hand and waving goodbye to my grandmother through a distant glass mirror as tears were streaming down her tanned cheeks. A week later‚ I was in a classroom full of posters of apples and some writing that was not in Spanish. In about three months
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Happy Moments Happy moments are everyone dream. In my whole life‚ it is uncountable how many happy moments that I’ve gone through since I was small.Happy moments are something that made us very happy and it is unforgettable.It will never be erased out of our mind and we will always remind of it for the rest of our life.It might happens daily‚weekly‚monthly and even annually but it really happened.it makes us smile to the ears and sometimes it tears us down.I just can’t imagine how does it feel if
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In my freshman year‚With the admiration to college‚ I had strived for and adherence to happy home‚ I came to Anhui University of technology and science. Everything was so nice and new‚ even though it is not as perfect as I imagine. I could still carry on my discipline habits cultivated in my dependent high school. I still remember day and time‚ in the doorway‚ with my case‚ a shy and slim boy was crowed in the welcoming bus‚ I was not like an Irish guy in New York actually‚ though I came from the
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for reactions‚ shear force and moment for: a. Simply supported beam b. Simply supported beam with one end overhanging c. Simply supported beam with both ends overhanging. 2. To calculate shear force and moment using influence line 3. To determine maximum shear force and moment 4. Calculate Absolute Maximum Moment (MMM) 4.1 INTRODUCTIONS: Influence line is to: Analysis a structure due to moving load along the beam. Show the changes in reaction‚ shear stress‚ moment and displacement in certain point
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the stage speaking‚ in front of the microphone and the audience‚ and suddenly my mind just went blank. Not knowing what to say next and too frightened to run off the stage‚ I tried to think really hard to recall the next line of my speech‚ and I failed. 5 seconds‚ 10 seconds......still nothing came to my mind. The pause was so noticeable that everyone must now know that I have forgotten the script of my speech. Feeling my feet sinking into the ground‚ I took a deep breath to stay calm‚ kept myself
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Memoir- Losing My Best Friend I remember everything as if it were yesterday. The shock‚ the sadness‚ the pain‚ and the sickness she had to suffer. I remember sitting beside her‚ holding her hand as she had IV’s put into her arms. I remember the conversations we had; she’d explain to me how she just wanted to go outside again; she’d be enthusiastic for the day she got out of the hospital; we made plans for when she beat cancer. Two years have gone by so fast‚ and there hasn’t been a day I haven’t
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back in time I found the poem “ This Moment” by Eavan Boland a complicated poem when I read it for the first time. I started to question myself once I finish reading it‚ what does this poem wants to tell us? The sentence was very short and each stanza doesn’t seem to be very related to each other. However‚ once I read it for the 2nd and 3rd time‚ I came to realize that the speaker wants to describe about a specific moment in her life. Starting from the daily life and activities she did to the love
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It was during the last summer break‚ my husband and I went to hike across the Alps on an ‘inn_ to_inn’ treak starting in the Alpi maritime nature reserve in Italy and finishing at the Mediterranean sea near the stunning town of Menton on the French Riviera. On our way from the mountains to the seaside‚ which is known as‚ ‘Route ‘de sel’ we explored classic‚ high alpine landscapes‚ bronze age‚ petroglyphs‚ and the historical villages and hamlets of the royal valley which boasts exquisite painted chapels
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and was in denial that my own brother had to deal with the conditions I was currently surrounded by. As much as I could not stand my brother at that moment‚ I still felt bad that my own blood related family member was faced with living in this life changing place that I saw through this barren dirt road and through the trees that were dying more and more as the seconds passed. Before I knew it the two and a half hour car ride was about to come to an end and I would see my brother for the first time
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