English Final Exam Unity: Achieved when all the elements in an essay contribute to the development of a single idea or thesis. Similarly‚ a paragraph is unified when each sentence contributes to the development of the central though expressed in the topic sentence of that paragraph. * In a unified paragraph‚ each sentence helps develop the main idea or the gist of the paragraph. The main idea often suggest a new‚ interesting relationship between two other ideas or facts not otherwise connected
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Ivory Koehn 9/10/2010 Descriptive Essay Under The Raised Hand Prologue When I was a young girl learning about life and love‚ I always thought that some man would sweep me off my feet and it was my fate to be with him and only him. My mother was not a big fan of love and fate. She didn’t have a very good history of guys and relationships. She would always tell us love was not a reality and we should find someone with a lot of money. My mother is a strong feminist woman and I tried as hard
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Descriptive Essay Rough Draft How can people be so comfortable with dogs that are known to be aggressive or even kill in some cases? They treat them as if they were cuddly teddy bears even though they can cause so much harm so quickly. But I never thought to ask these questions when I was a young‚ naïve child. I knew as much about dogs as a child who watches cartoons all day should: that they were “man’s best friend.” But one day my innocence was stripped away from me‚ and I developed and retained
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Descriptive Essay Being from the jersey shore there is many options to choose from‚ but Belmar beach is the most beautiful and exciting beach. Every time you go to Belmar beach there is always someone new to sit down and have an ice cold drink with. Belmar is also known to have the best over-head waves that look smooth and glossy from the sun reflecting off the water. My favorite place to hangout is at Belmar beach on a hot sweaty day with a cool ocean breeze filled with a lot of variety of people
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Descriptive Essay I turn the key and hear the old engine turn over a few times‚ struggling to get going. Eventually it starts. The engine sounds rough when cold‚ but with a few quick revs‚ it starts to sound a little better. The “check” light flashes at me until I press the brake pedal to let the car test the brake lights‚ or press the “check” button on the roof near the sunroof adjustment switch‚ between the two visors. When I press the “check” button‚ seven small‚ red‚ LED lights brighten to show
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English 152 Lynne Goldsmith Descriptive Essay October 23‚ 2014 Let Me Tell Ya ‘Bout My Best Friend Saige Mackenzie Polk‚ a five foot girl with ten feet of attitude and sass. The girl that everyone knows and watches in awe as she struts down the hallways. She’s the girl that succeeds with flying colors at everything she attempts‚ and never has a thought of giving up until she feels it is good enough for not only herself‚ but every other person around. Everything about Saige is spectacular from her
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Descriptive Essay Describe a place where you feel safe and protected HOME 449 words 8th of April 8‚ 2012 Describe a place where you Feel safe and protected The place that I feel safe and protected the most is the place where I live in the place where I grew in –my home. How does my house look? And how does its structure make me feel safe? Having my family around gives me a sense of security. People’s feelings and opinions when they visit our home. Can I feel safer
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Wesley Miller 9/1/13 Mr. Reynolds Descriptive Essay As a young boy my parents and I moved around often‚ never stopping in one place for more than a few months at a time. It was quite annoying that in every place I moved to I never got to unpack my boxes; I figured there was no point when I would be uprooted again soon. At the age of fourteen we moved to a large city named San Bernardino in California. As we arrived in the city I wasn’t surprised in the least seemed like any other
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Buenning Descriptive essay February 9‚ 2011 “When you smoke herb‚ it reveals yourself to you‚” is a famous quote of the pothead and marvelous musician Bob Marley. He felt as though marijuana helped tune in with your inner being. I believe cannabis that cannabis does this too and therefore have become a habitual marijuana consumer. Being in tune with ones inner being is important‚ yet not the reason that I smoke cannabis. The cannabis plant is beautiful‚ from the leaf to the buds you smoke
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Anh Phan ENG 099 7248795 Descriptive Essay Grandmother‚ the inspiration of my life I still remember every picture and actions of my grandmother‚ a woman who loves me and sacrifices for me and my father most. My father grew up in the north of Vietnam‚ and my mom and my family in the south of Vietnam. For the disadvantages of long distance‚ I could not visit my grandmother and grandfather regularly. Fortunately‚ in Tet Holiday in Vietnam when I was 7 years old‚ my parents took me to visit
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