NAME : Citra Hardiyanti Ningrum NIM : 132084022 SUBJECT : Paragraph Writing B REVISION Outline 1: The stolen case in the boarding houses in Lidah Wetan that recently happens are mostly caused by two major factors. a. Human errors. 1. By the room’s owner. 2. By the roommate. 3. By the room’s neighbors. b. The building’s condition. 1. There is no any CCTV or safety alarm. 2. The window is easy to open. 3. The key’s locket on the door is easy to be sabotaged. We can see that human errors
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Priya Rajkumar #12 8B Ms. Pasion Composition 16‚ February ‚ 2016 Body Paragraph # 1 (revised) One reason for why Hamlet‚ Prince of Denmark‚ is sane‚ is that his madness only manifests itself when he is in the presence of selective characters. Hamlet even says himself that he is only "mad in craft" [Shakespeare III.iv.188-199]. Hidden amongst the associates in question‚ exists his cowardly uncle‚ Claudius--the man responsible for the death of Hamlet’s father and Gertrude‚ his unfaithful mother
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Anthony Nguyen September 17‚ 2014 S.S. Island Paragraph A.N. Island The dictionary defines island as “a tract of land surrounded by water and is smaller than a continent”. The one and only A.N. Island was made an official island by Peter Nguyen on December 17‚ 1990. He was traveling on the ocean when he bumped into a piece of rock. He didn’t notice that he had bumped into the Cave of Death until Death Bear came. He was lucky that he had weapons on his boat such as robogun that he had invented
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Common Methods of Paragraph Development 1. Description: What does it look like? A. Presents a verbal portrait B. Evokes all of these senses. 1. Captures detail and wholeness 2. Contains specific vivid details Example: Have you ever had a moment that was set in your memory like a snapshot? I have one‚ and it is of my Grandma. Her hair was brown and wavy resting just below her shoulders. Her face‚ fair and smooth‚ was adorned with brown tinted glasses through which her beautiful blue eyes shown
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Patrice Morris January 30‚ 2012 Com/156 Body Paragraphs Recycling and waste prevention are two very important ways to help address the issues of the environment concerning climate change. Recycling is a very beneficial factor that more individuals need to exercise in order to improve the environment’s pollution‚ reduce emissions of greenhouse gases‚ and save energy and natural resources that are used to produce products from virgin materials rather than from recycled materials‚ which uses less
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Argumentive paragraph: The Cowardly Barber In the story‚ “Just Lather‚ That’s All” by Hernando Tellez‚ the barber would have been a coward had he killed Captain Torres because‚ when he killed the captain he was unarmed. Secondly‚ he would have to flee leaving all he had behind. Lastly‚ he would have been vulnerable. The barber was weak and afraid of killing captain Torres and to be called as the murderer of the captain. The barber would have been a coward because; he killed the captain
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explain in the first sentence. Sometimes it’s explained in the first paragraph depending on the text. That is the reasoning used to choose the very first sentence which is deemed the introduction. After choosing the first sentences the other sentences were simply based off of the order in which the first sentence stated the various situational factors. After identifying the order‚ it was a matter of easy flowing in which the paragraph as a whole would make sense thus giving you
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Darren Stapp Mr. Tyler MCM English III CP 19 September 2012 Speech in the Virginia Convention Paragraph “We have petitioned; we have remonstrated; we have supplicated; we have prostrated ourselves before the throne; and we have implored its interoperation to arrest the tyrannical hands of the ministry and Parliament.” Towards the middle of the “Speech in the Virginia Convention” by Patrick Henry‚ he appeals to the audience’s sense of logic by implying that they have protested to Britain
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English 101 Descriptive Paragraph 8/27/2013 On April 15th‚ 2013‚ 117th Boston Marathon took an ugly‚ sad turn for the worst. I am a reporter for Channel 7 news; I was scheduled to cover the Boston Marathon this year a job I wasn’t too thrilled about since I had no interest in the story. Little did I know this story would change my life and be the most horrific story I would ever cover. I gave the runners some time to cool off before I made my way to the winners to get an interview
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Great Gatsby Analysis Paragraph F. Scott Fitzgerald‚ in his classic novel The Great Gatsby‚ illustrates the American class system in three different categories: the “old” rich‚ the “new” rich‚ and the “not” rich. He shows how each class tries to reach the American dream and struggles to remain secure in the life inside America. Fitzgerald depicts the only class that survives is the “old” rich. In the first place‚ progressing throughout Fitzgerald’s novel‚ he derives that Tom Buchanan is inside
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