Good and Weak Thesis Statements There is really no wrong way to write a thesis statement‚ you either have a good or a weak thesis. I am going to explain four weak thesis statements I was given‚ then tell you what was weak about them and how to make it better. A weak thesis fails to take a stand and not be specific towards the topic. Just making an observation or an overly broad claim will not work. A good thesis is ideas that answers a question‚ it usually starts with an observation that is something
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bricks‚ stacked on top of each other‚ distract me from realizing where I am going. Looking out the window‚ the tired teens sigh as the bus advances towards the building. Other large‚ yellow buses also approach the uneven sidewalk‚ which leads to the school. Finally exiting the tightly-packed bus‚ the exhausted teens walk slowly off the bus and onto the sidewalk. Walking within the crowd‚ each step I take becomes one step closer to the closed doors. These doors are the Gates of Hell. Once you enter
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Researcher‚ one who wants people to be also pro K-12 Thesis Statement: Although adding 2 more years to the basic 10 year education system of the Philippines will cost the poorest Filipinos‚ imposing the 12 year education plan will give more job opportunities to students‚ make more globally competitive students and maximize their time on choosing their career base on ability. Outline: I. Introduction: A. The total percentage of college students who graduated in the Philippines in the year
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High school graduates are starting to feel that they must go to college. Teachers and counselors sometimes lead us to think that we only have one option to be successful. College might not be for everyone! From my research‚ I found many articles on reasons why people go to college‚ reasons they do not go to college‚ and statistics on going and not going to college. There are many leading factors on why people might not go to college. The financial aspects of college‚ the tests you must take to get
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A thesis statement is a strong statement that you can prove with evidence. It is not a simple statement of fact. A thesis statement should be the product of your own critical thinking after you have done some research. Your thesis statement will be the main idea of your entire project. It can also be thought of as the angle or point of view from which you present your material. When do I write it? You will develop a thesis statement about your research topic after you have written a Statement
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Ochoa ESL 1021 Is the cost of college too high? 100 % of the people in the world will like to go to college but only 1% of people in the world can go to college because the rest cant afford it‚ due to the expense. Many countries have the benefit to help students and so far only 3 countries in the world offered a free education and those are Sweden‚ Ireland and Finland. Nowdays‚ the cost of college is out of control the average kid or
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investments that a parent can make in a child. Most parents start a college fund as soon as they are born. A bachelors degree graduate earns around $40.478 per year as opposed to just $22‚ 895 for a high school graduate according to U.S. census bureau. But a child born in 1990’s have greater challenges since tuition has risen around 340% from this date. Many students unable to afford college are forced to take high interest loans for colleges leaving them financially stressed for a good portion of their
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Material Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet In this course‚ you will write a 1‚050- to 1‚750-word Personal Responsibility Essay‚ due in Week Five‚ which includes the following: • Define what personal responsibility means to you. • Explain the relationship between personal responsibility and college success. • Include a preliminary plan to practice personal responsibility in your education. This week‚ using the Center for Writing Excellence resources‚ provide the thesis statement
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Kimberly McLeod Oct. 18‚ 2015 Thesis statement “What is a meaningful life?” The simple answer is simply this: the meaning of life is whatever we choose it to be. One person may choose to provide food and shelter for oneself‚ for a family or for total strangers. Another person may choose to provide inspiration and guidance to others‚ or to accumulate wealth‚ and yet another person may choose‚ on a moment to moment basis‚ that which brings peace and
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I want to get good grades in all of my classes in high school. I want to get more than enough credits to graduate high school. I want to graduate high school. I want to be a valedictorian when I graduate high school. I want to Get into a good college where I can be successful. I want to get good grades in every one of my college classes. I want to be successful in college. I want to graduate out of college. I want to get a good job after college. I want to be successful in my job. I want to be responsible
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