step in my writing process. I kept writing and every time I would go back‚ changes were made. I revised many paragraphs and run on sentences. In the beginning‚ I began to procrastinate because I did not even want to think about such a complex seeming assignment. After my meeting with Professor Klein‚ she gave me a lot of good feedback and ideas on how to start strongly. After my meeting‚ I started my essay on a better track and got a few pages complete. After the peer review session in-class‚ I learned
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clock to hit midnight. As much as I wanted to be with friends that night‚ I really just wanted to fast forward to the long awaited morning ahead of me. Visiting my brother in prison at the Texarkana‚ Arkansas Regional Correction Center. The old rusty doors of the prison awaited my family and I‚ slamming behind us as we entered. We nervously walked up the screechy stairs to the family visitation center. I felt a roller coaster of emotions. I was eager to see my brother‚ after spending that last
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During my high school career‚ I participated in the MCJROTC program. It was there I met three Marine instructors that changed my life. I had them for four years‚ and every moment I spent with them was with pleasure. Each and everyone had a different influence on me from their advice‚ help‚ and the way they taught. Two of them‚ Major Wirsig and Sergeant Major Pereida‚ made the most influence on me with their different approaches in life. Major Wirsig retired after thirty eight years in the service
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elections‚ offices are held by either the Democratic or Republican party. With control always belonging to one of these parties‚ the smaller parties are not heard. Third parties‚ or minority parties as the text book notes‚ are rarely ever in office. I feel that all sides should be heard and accounted for. As we have seen with the Presidential debates‚ only the two main parties are addressed. The smaller parties should still hold some kind of importance of the Americans. The beliefs of the Democratic
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How My Positive Outlook Benefits My Community My positive outlook benefits my community in many ways. Helping one person in my community can have a trickle down affect to everyone in the community. Whether it is doing something big or small to help the out community can change the way people look at our community. Your community‚ your school‚ your lifestyle is what you make of it. A Positive Attitude can change the way we live in our community. One experience my community benefited from my positive
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One Family‚ Two Societies Growing up in a Pakistani household I was expected not to question or disrespect my father in any way. My father who was raised in Pakistan was a stern man‚ and stubborn at that. My father and I never really talked about anything serious. There came a point where I started to think and express my own opinions‚ which were different from what my father had. Over the past year I had become more independent of my father due the growing differences between both of us. Being raised
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How to Write a Gratitude Speech 1. Brainstorm a list of the ideas you want to include in the speech; then‚ if appropriate‚ consult others who wish to express their gratitude and jot down what they have to say. For example‚ if a corporation has made a donation to a nonprofit organization‚ the employees might each be able to tell you how the gift will impact what they do. If a service group has joined in your company’s efforts to clean up a derelict part of the city‚ residents of that area may want
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My Ishmael is a novel written by Daniel Quinn. The book starts with Julie Gerchak‚ a twelve year old girl who wants a new life. It’s 1996 in Atlanta‚ Georgia where she believes our world has gotten to its worst because of what has happened to her . Her mom is dysfunctional and an alcoholic. Her dad isn’t there with her and she has gotten used to living on her own. One day‚ Julie coincidentally notices an ad in the paper in search for pupils with “an earnest desire to save the world.” So‚ she takes
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coming to this school I wasn’t in a good place mentally. I had been struggling with depressive tendencies for a number years prior to my freshman year. However‚ 9th grade was essentially my breaking point. Overall‚ the year isn’t something I’m proud of but it has and will continue to influence who I am today. My best friend at the time wasn’t a good person either but for different reasons. She did everything in her power to bring me down in order to feel better about herself and I allowed her to
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people to keep and bear Arms‚ shall not be infringed”. The States ratified what Congress had passed to‚ “A well-regulated militia being necessary to the security of a Free State‚ the right of the People to keep and bear arms shall not be infringed”. Do the differences in punctuation and capitalization change the meaning? Many people believe that the Second Amendment means that only the military should have the right to carry guns. They believe that “A well-regulated militia” is referring to trained
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