“How to Revise an Essay” When revising an essay it is alway great to take a break from your essay before you revise you paper. Remember to seek the opinion of your classmates and allow your classmates to revise your essay. A great way to check your content in your essay is to state your thesis in a sentence. Remember‚ when revising your essay that your thesis is clear. You should make sure you have enough example to support your topic. When revising your essay remember to look for changes that may
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Liisa Steinwedel 6094157 Professor Langston ENG 1100 PP 4 November‚ 2010 Is Technology Always Beneficial? Thinking back to my grade ten English class‚ I cannot help but remember the time my teacher read my friend’s essay aloud. The whole essay sounded great‚ it had a strong argument and used exemplary grammar‚ until I heard the word ‘LOL’. The entire room burst out laughing‚ knowing perfectly well that using informal slang in a formal essay is inappropriate. What does this improper use of
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Q1 - In If I Stay by Gayle Forman‚ the novel reveals an important theme of love and friendship. This theme reflects the text incredibly well in my opinion. In a traumatic car accident in the novel on a snow day where Mia‚ her parents and younger brother Teddy decide to take the day off to visit friends. They pile into the car‚ joking and arguing about which music to listen to‚ like any other family going on a drive. The next thing Mia knows‚ she is overlooking the wreckage of their car. At first
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The customer is always right is usually wrong. In my line of work I see this every day. I am a manager at an outlet store and dealing with customers is my number one priority. There are all kinds of customers‚ some will make you happy‚ some will make you scream or some will just be okay. Customers sometimes do not realize that our job is to help them the best way we can. I believe that some of the customers are abusing the “customer is always right‚” because they know that the company does not
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Is The Customer “Always Right”? Abstract The customer is always right. It is the merchant’s wealth to safeguard the interests of customers. Many sellers think that some the customer is unreasonable and vulgar. Customer is always right for three reasons. First‚ the customer is always right is not the criterion of distinguished between right and wrong but is the criteria of the service work because the focus of the work is how to help customers make the right choices‚ and how to provide
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How I Love Highschool (A satirical essay on how I love school) It is just amazing on how much that I love school. School is the place where I go to relax and have fun. It is just so exponentially exciting going to the same place over and over again for what seems like an eternity. The biggest and most amazing surprise is all the amount of crap the teachers give us to do. I like having to waste my significant time being in a place that I wholeheartedly want to be at. I hope that the teachers have
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Introduction of Pioneer Whitney Young Jr.‚ a social work pioneer was born July31‚ 1921. He was an african american who lived in the south. He was actually born in his own house‚ on the campus of the Lincoln Institute of Kentucky. His father and mother taught school there. Both his mother‚ Laura Ray‚ and his father Whitney Young‚ Sr. were considered to be among the “black educated elite.” Whitney’s mother‚ Laura‚ was the first black postmaster in Kentucky. Whitney attended school at the Lincoln
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JIALIANG HE ENGL 102 04/24/2013 The Truth Is Not Always Good Niccolo Machiavelli‚ a man who knows the truth of political ethics‚ wrote his treatise into a book. The Prince‚ one of Machiavelli’s masterpieces‚ contains a number of maxims concerning politics‚ such as the qualities of the prince. By the saying that “the ends justify the means”‚ Machiavelli claimed that violence may be necessary for the successful stabilization of power and introduction of new legal institutions. Refer to political
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into a young woman‚ my parents advised me not to have a boyfriend until I finished school since it will get in the way of my academic performance. Unfortunately‚ it was not an advice that I followed. I am sure that in most cases‚ parents only want the best for their children. Although when it comes to parenting teenagers‚ the situation turns into something more than adults can bargain for. In some areas of the Philippines where I grew up‚ young men and women were much more sophisticated and conservative
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“The poor will always be with us”. This statement may seem to be pessimistic‚ but it actually can refer to two sociological predictions. The first is that the absolute condition of individuals will never improve such that there is virtually no one who‚ by no choice of their own‚ lives a lifestyle that is not acceptable. While the definition of “poverty” might change based on one ’s perspective and on relative conditions‚ a reasonable definition would be lacking sufficient shelter‚ food‚ potable water
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