Persistent challenges with writing‚ including inconsistency with established writing style; and spelling‚ grammar‚ and punctuation errors. Writing frequently requires extensive edits by reviewers. Occasional posting or emailing of incorrectly written material. I am truly dedicated to improving my writing skills. Last summer I took an eight-week UC San Diego Extension course that focused on grammar. On June 1‚ 2016‚ I participated in a Fred Pryor workshop that focused on grammar and proofreading
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Everyone wants to take a trip to an exotic place like; Australia‚ Brazil‚ or maybe even the Dominican Republic. Its just something that is on people’s minds because they want to travel somewhere besides what they have already seen. I took that exotic trip to the Dominican Republic and it was definitely life changing. It was a different experience compared to what I had seen in the United States. Everything there was so beautiful but it was also hard to see all the poverty in some parts of the Dominican
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Abby‚ my best friend‚ and I are going to Disney world. We won a contest and the prize is tickets to go to Disney world. It is currently 4:30 am and our plane leaves at 5:00 am. “Hey!” Said my best friend abby. “Hey!” I answered. “I can’t wait!” I say. Abby nods her head in agreement. Our plane boards at 5:00 am and it is only 4:30 am. Once we get to our gate we wait to board the plane. Once we got on the plane we head to Florida. After we get to Florida we get an Uber to our hotel which is a Disney
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The moon The moon is the only natural satellite of Earth. The moon orbits the Earth from 384‚400 km and has an average speed of 3700 km per hour. It has a diameter of 3476 km‚ which is about ¼ that of the Earth and has a mass of 7.35e22 kg. The moon is the second brightest object in the sky after the sun. The gravitational forces between the Earth and the moon cause some interesting effects; tides are the most obvious. The moon has no atmosphere‚ but there is evidence by the United States
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My strengths aren’t really much‚ because I don’t have lot of them. My strengths for writing include staying on topic‚ using examples‚ being organized‚ and good at explaining my problems and how I will address them. I was never good at staying on topic but I started being more careful with my writing. I make sure I never go off topic and talk about things that do not belong. I make sure that I am organized in my essay. For example‚ when writing my essays I make sure that I write about one thing per
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I’ve always wanted to go to a beach on the east and west coasts. I went to California two years ago‚ so that was my west coast. Last summer I we took a trip to Florida. I’ve always wanted to go to Florida for one reason and that is to go to Disneyworld. Although we didn’t go to Disney when we went I was still glad I was going. I went with my brother‚ cousin Joie‚ my grandma‚ and a few other cousins followed us. We were all going to another family member’s wedding. We stayed for about four
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My Riding Trip in the Mountains One day in April I was playing games in my room and my dad asks me if I want to go to the mountains to ride four wheelers and dirt bikes‚ and I said yes. So me and my dad walked up to the garage and put the trailer on the truck. The next day was Thursday and I had to load everything on to the trailer and into the truck. The first thing I had to load up was the clothes‚ sheets‚ blankets‚ tooth brushes‚ tooth paste‚ and a couple towels. Then I had to load up
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Since I was a young child my family has traveled around the world to see and experience new places. My favorite experiences have been in Italy‚ Austria‚ and the Czech Republic. In Italy most of the time was spent sightseeing and moving through museums and ruins that were thousands of years old. When we first arrived my mom‚ my brother‚ and I hurried into the big taxi with all our luggage in the blistering heat. Before long we had pulled off the highway and were amongst a winding road with trees
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Earth’s Moon The Earth’s Moon is the most important moon in the solar system in regards to Earth and all of the living things within it. It is also the only Moon that Earth has‚ whereas other planets‚ like Mars‚ have multiple Moons. The Moon is the only other Moon that humans have set foot on‚ which helped us to understand the formation‚ internal structure‚ and history of it. The “moon’s face” is the second brightest thing in the solar system after the Sun‚ and has a dark surface in actuality
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ShaTerrian Brown Mr. Janky English 1301 9/23/2013 My First Trip to Galveston Beach My family has always wanted to take a trip down to Galveston during the torrid summer. It was an exciting feeling to get away from the dry heated bustle of summer living in Dallas. Every summer‚ my family packs up and hits the superhighway to our well awaited family vacation. As we drove through city after city‚ it became apparent that the world around us was changing. As I was peering through the back seat window
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