5.8 Document for Analysis – Weak E-Mail Message‚ p. 121 Your task. The following e-mail suffers from numerous writing faults such as dangling modifiers‚ overuse of passive voice‚ and fragments. Notice that small superscript numbers identify each sentence. Individually or in a group‚ analyze this message. For each sentence or group of words‚ identify the following faults: dangling modifier (DM)‚ passive voice (PV)‚ and fragment (FR). Your group should agree on its analysis. Your instructor may ask
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First & foremost I would like to thank my dearest parents‚ & then my friends (because all the sMs here are forwarded by them only‚ so I think they should be thanked first !) & then there are some of my relatives too who have sent me messages & then if I continue I would certainly won’t have enough money to publish rest of my book. Also secondly I would thank my whole skeleton that includes all my body parts (especially my hands) who co-operated me a lot while doing these activities
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Jimmy McDunnah Mr. Pfister 9/10/10 The Messages in The Sword in the Stone There are many messages in The Sword in the Stone. Each adventure that Merlin sends the Wart on isn’t just for the reader’s entertainment. If you look deeper into the story you will see that the Wart’s adventures have some important life lessons also. In the Wart’s first adventure as a perch in his castle’s moat‚ the Wart learns two lessons. The first lesson he learns is the value of compassion. The second moral of the
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Science and PE Division Course Syllabus: General Chemistry I Spring – 2012 Chem 1411 – 4003 (4 Credit Hours) _____________________________________________________________________ Instructo ______________________________________________________________________ Course Description General Chemistry I:This is a Texas Common Course Number. This is a DCCCD Core Curriculum Course. Prerequisite: MATH 1314 or equivalent AND Developmental
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policy for University of Phoenix online courses? One message to any class forum on 2 separate days during the online week Question 2 Which of the following students has met the attendance requirement for an online course? Max posted one message on 2 separate days during the online week. Question 3 What is the participation requirement for University of Phoenix online courses? Two substantive discussion messages 4 days each online week in the Main forum Question 4 Which of the following students
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CIS 210 1-22-14 Introduction Automated systems exist to ease the effort required by manual system e.g. writing a letter by hand can be easily done through several existing word processors that provide various formatting and paging options. In case of automated inventory system‚ the whole inventory management and re-stocking can easily be done. Moreover‚ there is less likelihood of errors while handling stocks and hence‚ less strain. Automated inventory systems provide
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Business Statistics Problem Set # 8 Due Monday December 1st 1. You have data on three variables for college graduates: years of work experience‚ student GPA and monthly salary after graduation in $. You collect data from 6 students. Student Years of Work Experience GPA Monthly Salary ($) 1 3 2.6 3300 2 0 3.4 3600 3 4 3.6 4000 4 1 3.2 3500 5 2 3.5 3900 6 5 2.9 3600 Following are the regression results for the data using Excel. In this problem‚ you will be interpreting the regression results
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This document of AED 222 Week 8 Discussion Questions Part 2 consists of: DQ 1: Post the highlighted portions of the Appendix C matrix. (Be sure you only post the highlighted portions to avoid revealing the exceptionality you are addressing in your profile to your classmates.) General Questions - General Academic Questions AED 222 INTRO TO THE EXCEPTIONAL LEARNER / ENTIRE CLASS Never leave candles burning or your lights on when you are the last one out of your dorm. This can be an
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Appendix E 07/04/2012 HSM 210 Scenario 1: Violence Prevention in a High-Risk Community In scenario one the prevention level being used is the Primary level of prevention. The reason I believe that this method is being used because the services offered through the agency are ones to prevent the abused women from being depressed and leading to other psychological disorders. In this particular scenario I wouldn’t do anything different‚ I think that the agency has a good plan in effect for dealing
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Muhammad‚ a rich businessman who eventually married a rich widow in Mecca. In his middle age he began to receive revelations from the God that have been preserved in the Qur’an and spread it believe and teaching to the rest of the world. The basic message of Islam is Jackson J.S (2009) “there is no god but Allah and Muhammad is his prophet”‚ which mean the submission of human to the only God who called as “Allah” The only one who created the universal and Muhammad is the messenger of God. Essentially
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