Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! *Strengths of the essay: Hi‚ Britanny. My name is Kathleen‚ and I am going to help you strengthen your essay. Let’s get started. A major strengh
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Throughout the novel "The Quiet American"‚ authored by Graham Greene‚ a conflict of identity is seen to occur within the narrator and protagonist‚ Fowler. Due to the complexity of his character‚ Fowler as a narrator provides a valued yet sometimes flawed insight into the turmoil of his mind. This turmoil is none better displayed through his indecisive nature about whether or not he is similar to Pyle‚ the naive‚ inexperienced‚ and serious American operative working under the guise of an economic
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Peggy Orr Professor Knight Art History April 12‚ 2009 Ringgold’s Story Quilts Faith Ringgold’s artwork on her quilts is not only beautiful but literally tells stories. Ringgold began her artistic career more than 35 years ago as a painter. Today‚ she is best known for her painted story quilts -- art that combines painting‚ quilted fabric and storytelling. She has exhibited in major museums in the USA‚ Europe‚ South America‚ Asia‚ Africa‚ and the Middle
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because most people could not read. They were passed on by “shopes” The author is unknown and yet within this very long poem we are introduced to: Beowulf a hero who is intelligent‚ brave‚ and strong where good verses evil. Beowulf a man of faith and where he gets his strength and guidance from. “the Great placed complete trust/ in his strength of limb in the Lords favor. (H.669-670) Beowulf is an Epic Hero for he travels from Geatland to the Danes. Beowulf goes to Hrothgar’s aid. For
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The subject I will be focusing on is faith. The definition of means “belief that is not based on proof.” The way Interpret the definition is what comes around‚ goes around. I see Macbeth making a mistake where he lets it all go to his head. I believe in karma will get to him. Macbeth knows that it will come and that is what is holding him back. I think that Macbeth is trying to avoiding reality because if we was once then during evil someone could end up killing him. I would also like to add to my
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A journey to faith Time to be free. To let it go. To believe that the impossible had occurred‚ in an instant God’s healing power had changed my life forever. Overcome by the Blood of the Lamb and the Word of Our Testimony – everyone overcome. I had overcome‚ he had overcome for me‚ the Lamb‚ the one who sacrificed it all on that cross. To delight in you now‚ to rejoice let your name resound‚ is all I long for Lord‚ King of the Clouds. I worship You now. I stand in adoration... I lift my hands
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John Brehm’s “sea of Faith” is a short 46 line poem written in 2004‚ which vividly describes a conversation being played out in the speaker’s head. A student asks the teacher (speaker) if the Sea of Faith is physically real‚ to which the poems view shifts to the thoughts occurring in the teachers head. While he is forming his thoughts‚ he comes to the conclusion that the students in his class are unknowledgeable and don’t pay attention very well. His thoughts further develop to a pool of insults
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posing because the activity of acting in film was known only in terms of photography due to “struggle between a photographic and a theatrical conception of the body” (DeCordova‚ p 19). In 1908‚ a huge decrease in demand of documentary films led to development of dramatic films. It led to a huge popularity of people who appeared in films and who had a blend of the profilmic‚ filmic and the real stories. The blend led to strengthening of the concept called the picture performer and acceptance of the fact
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Within our constantly evolving and ever-changing western world‚ what is seemed as being deviant has shifted and adopted to suit the norms and values of the society. The Issue of obesity has become increasingly prominent within the western society. Obesity is a term used to describe body weight that is much greater than the health range. Adults with a body mass index greater than 25kg/m2 but less than 30kg/m2 are considered overweight (Insel‚ 2009). The western culture has infiltrated daily lives
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Katherine Donado Writing III October 5‚ 2012 Technology Technology is valuable because it is used in every day. As Mandana Mohsenzadega states in‚ “OMG: Tweeting‚ Trending‚ and Texting” people feel incomplete without technology (448). Technology was intended to bring people closer and increase communication. To be able to stay in contact more in a faster way when is impossible to see a family member. Maybe they might live in a
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