Strategies: In her portfolio‚ Diana did average on incorporating the reading and writing strategies. The conclusion wasn’t as strong as it should’ve been‚ but she had good body paragraph structure. The hook doesn’t really grab your attention as it should‚ and the thesis should be stronger and more brief. For example‚ the first sentence of the essay‚ which is commonly referred to as the hook‚ is too long and could potentially cause the readers to lose interest. Diana also did good using reading and
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President Barack Obama and Princess Diana have both made huge differences in society. During Obama’s nearly eight years as President‚ the unemployment rate has dropped to below 5% and he is the first president to publicly express support for same-sex marriage. Princess Diana played a significant role in changing people’s perceptions of people with HIV‚ as well as the passing of The Mine-ban Convention. President Barack Obama was born on August 4th 1961 in Honolulu‚ Hawaii. He is the 44th and current
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Zoe’ Strawn Mrs. Leopard AP Lang and Comp Rhetorical Analysis of Four Articles Upon Princess Diana’s Death Princess Diana of Wales was killed in a car accident in Paris‚ France in 1997. She was divorced from England’s Prince Charles and a mother to Princes William and Harry. In her life‚ she was known for her philanthropy and her marriage with the Prince. The accident was known around the world and many newspapers and news programs wrote articles about the late Princess’s death. The Queen of England
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Punctuality Good morning everyone! Before I give out my speech‚ I want to ask all of you a question. How many of you have never been late? Odds are none of you! This is because in our nature we see punctuality as flexible. In my speech I’m going to talk about whether punctuality is an important matter in our daily lives or not. Firstly‚ what is punctuality? Well… punctuality is the act of being on time and being able to do a task in the required time. Picture the situation:
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Diana Gant‚ a Drexel University sleep expert‚ reported that most people need nine to 10 hours of sleep in order to avoid public and personal safety hazards‚ on Tuesday. Gant‚ who has been a member of the psychology department for 17 years‚ began studying sleep as a graduate student. Through her studies‚ she found a correlation between lack of sleep and accidents. “Going without enough sleep is as much of a public and personal safety hazard as going to work drunk‚” said Gant. “It can make people clumsy
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The richer you are‚ the more justice you get The idea of the being rich and getting much more justice is an idea which has been around for a long time. Social and criminal justice has always been dependant on how much money an individual‚ or group of individuals have. Two identical cases can go to court‚ and two different outcomes can be reached. The only difference in the ruling is due to the wealth of the defendant. However‚ is it really justice to commit crimes and not face any punishment?
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experiment that test how far individuals would go in obeying orders‚ even if carrying out those orders caused serious harm to others. This experiment caused a lot of controversy and one woman in particular believed that this experiment was immoral. Diana Baumrind’s "Review of Stanley Milgram’s Experiments on Obedience" says that Milgram "entrapped" (329) his subjects and potentionally harmed his subjects mentally. Both authors are obviously concerned with ethics and validity but both see them in a
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Western Theories of Justice Justice is one of the most important moral and political concepts. The word comes from the Latin jus‚ meaning right or law. The Oxford English Dictionary defines the “just” person as one who typically “does what is morally right” and is disposed to “giving everyone his or her due‚” offering the word “fair” as a synonym. But philosophers want to get beyond etymology and dictionary definitions to consider‚ for example‚ the nature of justice as both a moral virtue of
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September 2014 Pursuing Criminal Justice Our world today is filled with crime. Therefore‚ the people committing these crimes must have a consequence for their illegal actions. The system in place to keeping everything fair and safe is called the criminal justice system. Like in any other career it has its pros and cons‚ starting with the good pay‚ the long hours‚ and the high demand with multiple favorable benefits. The first good thing about criminal justice degree is its good pay. Some
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When you look up synonyms for the word justice‚ or ask someone what they think the word means‚ they will spew out nouns such as: neutrality‚ fairness‚ impartialness‚ etc. I believe justice in terms of the criminal system is the collaboration of three different entities‚ police‚ court‚ and corrections. That have to work together to form an illusion of one single entity; and in doing this‚ they have to still maintain a check and balance system amongst themselves. So‚ no one system should be able to
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