my classmates has helped my writing and me in many ways. The peer editing comments help me know what to change in my writing. When I read and hear other classmate’s essays and journals it gives a lot of information that I didn’t even know. When peer editing‚ it helps me understand what people think about my writing and how they think I can make it better. The comments that are given to me by the editor tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling
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Do You See The Jetsons Going to Church? Mark H Dillon Colorado Christian University 11 March 2015‚ Submitted: 14 March 2015 Author Note: Prepared for “History of Christianity” HIS-211-A-ON25; Professor Lilia Anand Abstract In the past 20 years the percentage of Americans that say that they believe in God has dropped by 8%. (CNSNews.com) - A new Harris Poll finds that a strong majority (74 percent) of U.S. adults say they believe in God‚ but that ’s down from the 82 percent who expressed
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To what extent do you agree with the view that ‘the Old Poor Law made poverty worse’ The Poor Law was the way that the poor were supported in 1815. Each parish had to take care of its own poor and provide money to cover the basic costs of living for those who couldn’t. However‚ the cost of the Poor Law was increasing every year and many criticisms were found raising ideas of whether the poor law was helpful or not. A major and obvious problem with the poor law was that the population was rapidly
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workload‚ working adults usually have to work overtime or bring their work home for completion. Parents are now spending less time with their children and other family members. Thus‚ the lack of communication among family members has affected family relationships‚ cause misunderstandings to easily arise and sometimes‚ even resulting in broken families. Moreover‚ maids are now shouldering the responsibility of looking after the children simply because parents do not have the time to look after their
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Do you believe that your choices are free? Do you hold yourself responsible for your choices? Life is full of endless choices‚ opportunities‚ new ideas and changing scenarios. To overcome the obstacles‚ we have to be ready to juggle the options that appear on our way. Every day‚ every hour‚ even every second‚ people make decisions. Small‚ large‚ important‚ funny‚ mundane‚ all those countless choices with the speed of light forever change us‚ turning the world into one that the second time will
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shutting my eyes‚ and not doing my work to my full abilities. (3) Interestingly‚ I have noticed on the days I sleep in‚ my grades increase higher. (4) Sleeping in‚ students have nicely rising grades and focus in the classroom. (5) When researchers study teenage sleep patterns they find that when schools start at 8:30 students don’t fall asleep in class‚ which is not surprising(FS). (6) Schools should start at 8:30. (7) Ended school days‚ I have more energy to do my
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As I walked through the hallowed halls‚ onto the stage that had held the best musicians in the world‚ the importance of what I was about to do was at the forefront of my thoughts. My hands were shaking‚ my heart was racing‚ and yet I knew that this was where I was meant to be. Not even my nerves could mar this momentous occasion. On I played Carnegie hall. “How do you get to Carnegie Hall?” is a common question. When violinist Mischa Elman was famously asked this question‚ he simply replied “Practice
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Longtail what do you want to tell me‚’’ said Fireheart. Well one time I saw Tigerstar at Snakerocks and he had a dead rabbit with him and smelled dog sent so I thought I should tell Tigerstar but I saw him feeding the dogs‚’’said Longtail. Go on answered‚’’ Fireheart. They were the biggest dogs I have ever seen‚’’ said Longtail. I could sense Longtail was very scared about what happened‚’’ thought Fireheart. What happened to Tigerstar‚’’ asked Fireheart. He returned to his territory‚’’ answered Longtail
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HELEN: What do you say‚ Emma? EMMA: Thank you‚ Aunt Julie. Janice approaches to the table with the bowl of soup for Aunt Julie‚ and she spills it on her accidentally. JULIE: Stupid maid! You don’t know how to do anything right? Julie slaps Janice in the face. EMMA: Don’t do that to my nanny! HELEN: Silence‚ Emma. Janice runs into the kitchen‚ crying. Emma enters to the kitchen‚ just behind Janice. EMMA: Are you okay‚ Nanny? JANICE; Yes‚ Miss Emma. Go back to the dining
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peasants. This alliance made Russia economically self-sufficient therefore foreign aid was unnecessary. The future of the revolution 1) A bureaucracy is a system of administration or management where administration or management where administrative work is delegated to a large number of officials. 2) Lenin was worried that Trotsky may take over as dictator. 3) The left wing feared that the bureaucrats who had joined the party for the main purpose of getting well-paid jobs lacked the revolutionary
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