It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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Seizures I have chosen the topic Seizures for my essay because I believe people need to understand this condition and find a cure! I started having seizures February 4th‚ 2010 and it forever changed my life. I have always lived and breathed baseball. When my seizures started‚ they came out of nowhere. It was scary‚ frustrating and I couldn’t understand why it had to happen to me. I spent several days in the hospital and they diagnosed me with Cortical Dysplasia which is basically a neurological
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footballer in Moscow region. I want to read the essay About me essay is an exercise that is given to students so that they can learn writing on different topics. It is the first step of writing‚ when you will learn to write about yourself‚ you will also learn about writing other topics. For writing about me essay‚ all you have to know is your own self. The essay about myself comes under the category of narrative essays. In about me essay‚ you have to include the details of your life such as your
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The song Let it be by the Beatles is an amazing song with a generous amount of catchiness and a great sense of rhythm. The Beatles were all from Liverpool‚ United Kingdom and moved to the United States to make amazing songs. The members of the band include John Lennon (guitar)‚ Paul Mccartney (bass)‚ George Harrison (guitar)‚ and Ringo Starr (drums). George Harrison‚ John Lennon‚ and Paul Mccartney were the songwriters of the Beatles. The song Let it be is produced in the album Let it be‚ it fits
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After thinking for quite a while about what topic to write this diagnostic essay on‚ I decided to write about one week I volunteer at a kid’s day camp during the summer. I would show up every morning while the dew was still clinging to the blades of grass at Blythe Park. I would arrive an hour before everyone else to prepare the circles of safety and to collect tinder that would litter the ground under the giant pines. The circle of safety was about a 2-foot diameter circle of bricks I would order
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CCLD MU 2.8 CCLD MU 2.8 Contribute to the support of positive environments for children and young people Title Contribute to the support of positive environments for children and young people 2 3 Assessment criteria The learner can: Level Credit value Learning outcomes The learner will: 1. Know the regulatory requirements for a positive environment for children and young people 1.1 Describe what is meant by a positive environment 1.2 Identify regulatory requirements that underpin a positive
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The poem "Let America Be America Again" by Langston Hughes purposefully is reminiscent of Walt Whitman’s "I Hear America Singing" in which Whitman is optimistic about this land of democratic opportunity. Hughes‚ however‚ writing from a black man’s perspective‚ is much less optimistic about what American has been or will be. While Whitman’s’ poem was very unstructured in blank verse‚ Hughes’s poem is more tightly controlled with rhyme‚ tone‚ rhetorical questions‚ and more unified with repeated anaphora
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The two themes in the texts‚ “I Have A Dream” by Martin Luther King‚ and “Let America Be America Again” by Langston Hughes were both directed to the conflicts in that period of time. Although they are very similar‚ they also differ. In Martin Luther King’s‚ “ I Have A Dream” he talks more about African Americans and how their rights are different from whites just because of their skin color. While in Langston Hughes poem he talks about immigrants‚ African Americans‚ Native Americans‚ and poor people
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Enrolment Day Written Task 1. The title ‘let the children play’ suggests ideas such as; let the children be free or leave the children to do what children should do. 2. The writers main argument is that parents today are molly-coddling the next generation and denying them the opportunity to mature and develop essential life skills. b. Her concerns are that the next generation of children will grow up almost scared of the outside world. They will learn to be distrusting of adults and also
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Stranger in the Photo is Me Essay “Say cheese‚” says my mom and click‚ this moment is saved forever. And now taking a photo allows a moment in time to be kept in remembrance. Photos are objects that are cherished; they hold memories‚ both good and bad. Photos allow us to remember the lessons and experiences that make us who we are today. INSERT REST OF PARAGRAPH Looking through my photos in attempt to age one of them‚ I chose this one specifically because this was the only picture that truly
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