Seth Hendrixson 10/4/12 Writing Assignment 6.12 Five weaknesses of the letter: 1. When writing you should limit your long lead in sentences. Here is an example of a long lead in sentence from the letter: “To ensure the improvement of your after-hours security‚ you should initially make a decision with regard to exactly what you contemplate must have protection.” You could re-write the sentence to say: “To improve your after-hours security‚ you must decide what needs to be protected
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A happy campus A happy campus is an enjoyable and comfortable place to study. There are a lot of good and helpful facilities. It’s a green space for teachers and students to recreate. It also has some places for entertainment. A happy campus has a great number of good and helpful facilities. There are modern classrooms‚ excellent libraries and health centers. Modern classrooms have a lot of helpful equipment for teaching and studying such as computers and projectors. Besides these classrooms‚ excellent
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so because it is in the family where one first learns to speak‚ to think‚ and to act. It is where one is first taught with life’s values‚ morals‚ and ethics. It is where one first experience to manage his or her emotions; like how and when to be happy or be unhappy. Therefore‚ the society judges and blames the family owing to the individual’s misbehaviour and misconduct. This has mostly been the after effect of the problems that the Filipino families face today. In the many problems that the
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Personal Narrative (My Best Birthday Ever) Birthday comes only once a year. This year my birthday was celebrated‚ the way i wanted it to be. It was the night of 25th August. I was in my bed waiting patiently and starring at the clock‚ hoping that when will the clock strike 12:00 am and the calendar will change its date. I waited and waited. After some while‚ it was 12:00am. I was so curious about the e surprise my parents promised me. But I found out that no one knocked at my door to wish me. Suddenly
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your draft has a theme which is centred around a meaningful event / incident / action etc. Plot a story which has a strong and interesting beginning and end with a solid impression. [ The 3 examples below are only simple and straight forward writing style. In order to make it more interesting; use phrasal verbs‚ idioms / wise sayings ‚ dialogs / flashback etc to leave a strong lasting impression. Sample 1 Ai Ching and Mary knew that Miss Sarimah was now in safe hands. They watched the
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consider that a bad thing. How am I supposed to know what I will want to spend my time doing at age 40? When I think about the future‚ I definitely don’t see myself working at the Market Basket‚ but in reality‚ if that was what would make me happy‚ I would do it. So‚ the next time someone asks me what I want to be
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Analysis “The Happy Man” Ринчино Сарюна‚ гр. 02194 I’m going to analyze a novel “The Happy Man” by Somerset Maugham‚ a well-known English novelist‚ short-story writer‚ playwright and essayist. William Somerset Maugham was born in Paris‚ educated at King’s school in Canterbury and studied to be a doctor at St. Thomas Hospital in England. He was one of the best known writers of his time as hi was master of short stories. The story starts with the narrator thinking and telling the reader about his
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1. Moem 2. Title – The Happy Man the only one of his kind‚ who achieved smth‚ then – who followed his dream. 3. Gist 4. Narrator - 1st person narrator (The narrator is the participant of the narrated event) The main character is the narrator. There is no any information about him in the text. Nevertheless we can judge about his character from his thoughts‚ behavior and speech. The description of his character is indirect. He is a wise man & a bit ironical towards life: he knows that it is impossible
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Healthy and Happy Ruth I Love ENG121 Dr. Marsha Beckwith-Howard Running Head: Healthy and Happy 1 I have had Tardive Dyskinesia for about 15 to 16 years now. I can tell you it is not very fun.Your body hurts all over‚ you have to go to extreme therapy. My Dr. recommended that I get into a neurological exercise class at our local YMCA Gym. My nutritionist helps me with the right foods to
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My Impressive Birthday Party Ever since I got into my university three years ago‚ my family and I didn’t have much chance to spend time together because everyone was so busy with their own schedule. So last year‚ we all decided to go uptown to celebrate my birthday there. We chose to go to Suratthani because it was our favorite place. We left our house late in the evening on one hot summer day in April. Because of the very hot weather‚ we brought our hats‚ our sun block‚ and never to forget‚ our
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