think you have some really great points in this essay and I like the topic. You just need to work through it to decide what you find to be most important. Things to remember while editing: Show don’t tell and this essay is about YOU and not just the program or what Colorado has to offer. Great work so far. Keep editing! You are heading in a good direction. (note: green edits are grammar and sentence structure edits. Yellow edits are my comments at the end of each paragraph) -Molly Have you ever
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Olanihun Fatungase‚ nee Cole (I love you Grandma). iii ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS My foremost acknowledgement goes to God Almighty. The grace‚ mercies and favour shown me over the years and in the course of this work cannot go unnoticed. I am overwhelmingly grateful to you Lord and I ascribe all glory to your name in assurance of a better tomorrow. I am deeply thankful to my Project supervisor‚ Dr. J.O Odelola for guiding me through this work. I am happy to be groomed by you. Your consistent show of attention
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Good morning ladies and gentlemen‚ my respected and honorable judges‚ teachers and fellow students. Around 7 billion people are on this planet‚ and that 7 billion in rupiah is the exact amount that we loose every single day to lavish the lives of immoral men. This is the very price we have paid for progress while they sit back and enjoy pornography in our parliament hearings. Have this fact ever crossed your mind‚ ladies and gentlemen? And more importantly‚ how? HOW? do we exactly put an end to this
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11 do you think that college professional show favoritism among student Teachers respond more to students who express interest in the material taught in class. Nevertheless‚ other teachers are interested in the personal appeals they receive from individual students‚ making extra attention to such students appear discriminative. Therefore‚ I think teachers show favoritism among students because of their relationship in and out of class. Personally‚ I think that it is difficult for teachers
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Hello‚ my name is [insert name] ‚ and I’m running for school president. You may know me‚ but for the ones who don’t I am an [enter grade]. Today I’m going to tell you why I should to be school president. I’m here to discuss fun‚ and more important things. I know that it is the beginning of the year ‚ but have we done anything fun this year or are we? And what funds have we raised for field trips? Nada! Right. I‚ [insert name]‚ should be voted for school President this year because
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evening to all the respected dignitaries‚ teachers‚ my lovely seniors and friends‚ I Yashodhar of M.E VI sem am humbled and honored to have the opportunity to bid you farewell from your juniors. On behalf of my class‚ I want to congratulate every one of you on your successes at Global Institute Of Technology & Management. It seems like just the other day when we were all talking about our senior’s farewell as they move on. I remember thinking that it would be hard to say goodbye ... and I was right
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