O.L. #3B Question #1 is worth 5 points – all others are worth 1 point each. Either type your answers directly onto THIS sheet OR create a new file and number your answers 1‚ 2‚ 3‚ etc. 1. The following "gem" comes from the business world and as you can see is filled with redundant‚ empty‚ wordy‚ AND unnecessary phrases. Re-write it so that the ideas are expressed in a much clearer and more stylistic way. To: District Managers From: Margaret Davenport‚ Vice
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Writing a Thesis or Dissertation Proposal 1 Writing Thesis and Dissertation Proposals The Graduate Writing Center of the Center for Excellence in Writing Overview: This workshop will introduce basic principles of writing proposals across a range of disciplines. It will present practical strategies‚ and it will include examples of successful proposals. Goals 1. To introduce strategies for bridging the gap between coursework/beginning research and thesis writing. 2. To help you understand the
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My creative writing piece Have you ever seen anyone dying from smoking? I have Stop! Stop! Stop! Put a stop to smoking because it can kill people from the inside and the outside by which I mean the environment. A cigarette is like fire it can burn a person from the inside. First of all‚ smokers can inhale as much smoke and tar as they want in a day and legally there is no limit to this when there is a limit on the speed of a car and no limit on how much smokers are taking in and damaging their health
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Descriptive writing – English Dubai has the tallest buildings and the largest malls‚ in the night the sparkly skies make me exited like a small child that has sweets‚ it is the city that never sleeps. At night the moment that the fireworks will bursts in the clear black sky‚ the people were on every Spot on the ground they were like the sun’s rays in summer. Suddenly I can see lime green rockets zooming it to a pitch black sky‚ amongst the twinkling white stars. Everyone looked incredibly amazed
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References: Scot Ober 7th Edition Contemporary Business Communication Source: Federal News Service October 11‚ 2012 Transcript of the Oct. 11 debate between Vice President Biden and his Republican challenger‚ Rep. Paul Ryan of Wisconsin‚ moderated by Martha Raddatz of ABC News. Adam
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Creative Writing My breath steamed the air‚ my eyes wide open looking into the distance as drips of sweat rolled down my forehead. My ears twitched at every sudden noise; I just hoped nothing would jump out of the darkness. I kept thinking about where I was and how I got to this place. Every footstep echoed for miles as I stepped upon the Iron Gate‚ the noise rattling my brain. I came to a halt‚ my sweaty hand roaming over the freezing cold steal on my chest as I tightened my only protection
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completion of which‚ I return to my country for a vacation. I went to Port louis for a trip and ‘I could not believe how much the place had changed since last year.’While travelling in a brand new bus I saw some unfamiliar buildings of hospitals‚ colleges and radio stations.The buildings were all one of a kind in their structures and colours. I was glad to find that I was traveling on a new road and that there were significantly less polluting cars on the highway compared to last year. On my way‚
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1. The title of the draft is descriptive‚ however it can be be improved by using the method that the Anteater’s Guide to Writing and Rhetoric shows us. The first part of the title can be more creative‚ while the second part can be more descriptive so that the readers know what the paper is about. The draft has the descriptive part‚ but can use the creative aspect as well. 2. The introduction did a very good job at grabbing my attention‚ because it clearly stated and described the problem and
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org/RUAC8BAR00 Jose‚ V Sogge‚ D. (2002). Give and Take What ’s the Matter with Foreign Aid? Manila: IBON BOOKS. The Philippine Banking Sector. (2003). Manila‚ Philippines: IBON BOOKS. Todaro‚ M. P. (1989). Economic Development in the Third World (Fourth Edition ed.). New York: Longman Group Ltd.‚ London. Total External Debt. (n.d.). Retrieved September 3‚ 2011‚ from bsp official website: http://www.bsp.gov.ph/statistics/spei_new/tab17.htm Villegas‚ E
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morning routine‚ but in a more sluggish way‚ and put aside the fact that it is three in the afternoon. All I wished to do was crawl back in bed‚ but I was being forced to attend this youth group at the church down the street. Hating every bit of my life at the moment‚ I throw on the dress that I secretly shoved in my bag last Thursday at Tj Max. Though the dress was only worth $29.99 and was on the clearance rack for 40%‚ I still felt some kind of rush getting away with such a thing. Most 15 year
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