It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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strengthen his company’s culture by reinforcing these norms and attitudes that encourage team work‚ perseverance and endurance. Why did I decide to write about this?: I have been working for Seagate technology for about 10 years and have been witnessing this herculean effort of team building since 2001. I attended a scaled down version of Eco Seagate in early 2002‚ which was equally rigorous and challenging but gave me a new way of thinking about team dynamics. The current form of Eco Seagate is a week-long
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Jasanoff‚ Maya. “The Other Side of Revolution: Loyalists in the British Empire.” The William and Mary Quarterly 65 (2008): 205-232. In‚ “The Other Side of Revolution: Loyalists in the British Empire‚” Mary Jasanoff discusses the treatment of British sympathizers during and after the American Revolution. Loyalists included many different demographics of people such as slave owners‚ slaves seeking freedom by joining the British army‚ and allied tribes of Native Americans. In this article‚ Jasanoff
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Young people in precarious work This essay will evaluate young people in precarious work‚ which has been a topic of controversial debate for several decades. Precarious work is the uncertainty as to the duration of employment‚ which often leads to multiple possible employers or an ambiguous employment relationship; as well as a lack of access to social protection and benefits associated with employment‚ low pay‚ and substantial legal and practical obstacles to joining a trade union and bargaining
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In ‘I know why the caged bird sings‚’ Maya Angelou explores various themes that reflect her real life situation. One of the most outstanding themes is racism. Maya was born and bred in a highly racist society that was largely divided between whites and blacks. This shaped her early life and young adulthood. ‘I know why the caged bird sings‚’ presents a vivid autobiography of her experiences. In fact‚ the title is a metaphor describing her desire to escape from her confines‚ just like a bird struggles
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Sir Chief-Maya Fever The late morning show “Be Careful with My Heart” of ABS-CBN continues to soar up high in terms of ratings and popularity nationwide and worldwide. It gives entertainment‚ lessons and moral values that everyone can relate into. It is suitable for children‚ teenagers‚ fathers‚ and mothers and even for senior citizens. It is a variety show that teaches about love for family and also respect for every individual despite their standings in life. A simple girl‚ Maya dela Rosa
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Stranger in the Photo is Me Essay “Say cheese‚” says my mom and click‚ this moment is saved forever. And now taking a photo allows a moment in time to be kept in remembrance. Photos are objects that are cherished; they hold memories‚ both good and bad. Photos allow us to remember the lessons and experiences that make us who we are today. INSERT REST OF PARAGRAPH Looking through my photos in attempt to age one of them‚ I chose this one specifically because this was the only picture that truly
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Summary Response: “Supersize Me: It ’s Time to Stop Blaming Fat People for Their Size” November 18‚ 2013 Being Obese Is a Choice That Has Very Few Exceptions Alison Motluk believes that people who are obese shouldn ’t be to blame for their obesity. (562). Motluk claims that “In 1992 about 13 percent of Americans were clinically obese...ten years later that figure skyrocketed to 22 percent...” (562). Many other countries such as the UK‚ Australia‚ and many other Western countries are following
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graduated and I have also changed my mind a time or two. I think I have finally found what I want to be in life and I want to become an OBGYN. I feel that by becoming a medical assistant I will get my foot in the door. By getting my foot in the door I will be on my way to success I am very excited to learn the different aspects of the medical field and how they all work together. Why Do I want to be medical assistant? I want to be medical assistant because my mom has been working as a CNA for the
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One thing that sets me apart from the other candidates applying to the University of California is my hard work. I have always been smaller than other kids my age. At 15 years old I was 4’ 10’’ and looked like I was eleven years old. Although this was an advantage at the airport‚ when I would begin to take off my shoes and the TSA Officer would look at me and say‚ “Don’t worry twelve and under can keep their shoes on.” I was often discredited for my size. Especially because I played volleyball‚ a
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