previous to this one. In the narrative essay "Free Falling"‚ there were several points I picked up on. The author focused on describing where this exactly took place‚ giving the reader a better understanding of his surroundings and encounters. For example‚ he would describe who he was there at that specific moment and their expressions to give a better reading of the atmosphere. Some background information that hints the main point of the essay was the tone he was using. He
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EDWARD CALHOUN COLLEGE WRITINGIII PROFESSOR KLINGBEIL November 5‚ 2010 Essay #5 Second Draft MY FUNNIEST MOMENT IN MY LIFE I would like to tell you about one of the funniest moments in my life. I was around fourteen or fifteen at the time. I had a friend by the name of Antione who was my best friend. We did everything together‚ from going to school dances to weekend parties at other friend houses. None of that compares to what my friend Antione did to me one cloudy morning.
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“Never put your key to happiness in someone else’s pocket.”~Anonymous. It was the Fourth of July‚ and my parents were planning a small party with our next-door neighbors. By this time I was in third grade and very close to a friend my age that lived next door. He had a little brother‚ who I thought was pretty intimidating for his age‚ considering he never obeyed or listened to anyone‚ and made up his own rules‚ like a visualante. On the other hand I had two sisters. The older one‚ Ronnie‚ I thought
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them and was off to upstate New York for the next 62 days. This was day when I look back upon it changed my life forever. I was not the most well behaved kid and I had gone through a rough patch over the last two years which lead to me getting sent away to wilderness and then later boarding school for the next 26 straight months. I had gotten kicked out of my two previous high schools and had fallen into the wrong crowd and had started using‚ stealing‚ vandalizing‚ and skipping school often. This
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Personal Narrative Essay During my final years of elementary school I began to notice that something was off. I realized that the adults around me‚ especially teachers‚ treated me differently than all the other children and students. It wasn’t until the start of middle school that I figured it all out. I remember sitting down with my Mother and chatting about the absurd topic. She appeared distraught and reluctant when I asked her why everyone I knew treated me like I was some fragile thin pane
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Rough Draft Cause/ Effect Essay‚ ESL 115 Heidy Collado April 11‚ 2011 Word Count 504 The Effects of Moving to a New Country New country‚ new life and new challenges‚ a person experiences all of these things when they move to a new country. It is difficult to start all over when our live all ready exist elsewhere. When a person has lived a part of their life in another country‚ it is a challenge to come to a different country. Growing up knowing everyone’s name and their personalities is extremely
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I remember a few months after I settled into Shanghai‚ my mother took me to a ballet class. Back when I lived in Australia‚ I adored my dance classes‚ so when I found out I was overjoyed. As we headed to the studio‚ I had on a leotard that a parent from Australia had made for me. It was a gorgeous rose pink and its nylon fabric reflected against the light‚ with that a smooth‚ lightweight chiffon skirt wrapped around my waist‚ below‚ typical ballerina tights. I steadily walked into the class in my
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I felt this sense of fear‚ but I knew it was just nervousness. It caused my whole body to tremble. I creeped onto the field and pass by the fifty girls and all of the coaches. Just me walking by everyone gave me this ginormous knot in my stomach‚ it made me feel like I was going to pass out right on the field. I was breathing heavy‚ like I just ran a marathon. I was beyond nervous just to be the new girl on the field. I was scared of what the girls thought of me‚ and how the coaches thought I would
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High School Wind Ensemble “From the beginning‚” the conductor whispered‚ while bringing his arms up in a stance which made him look like he was ready to fight a raging battle against ferocious warriors. I could feel my palms sweating as I touched the cold metal of my saxophone‚ bring it up to my mouth into ready position. I quickly glanced around me at the other ambitious players‚ each one of them barely sitting on the edge of the black band chairs‚ nearly bursting at the seams with excitement
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I woke this morning just like every morning sprawled out on my old mattress on the floor. As I began to wake to what seemed like an ordinary hot summer day. As I was getting changed there was a loud urgent bang on the door of the little tin hut at the edge of the lake I called home. This was unusual as I live alone and don’t usually get any visitors apart from the odd lost hiker. I finished getting changed and opened to door to meet them. “Please I need your help!” a distressed teenager pleaded
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