this semester‚ this was my weakest. I wanted to take all the information that I have obtained and apply it to a beginning assignment. This way I could judge if I had retained feedback that was given. For this revision process‚ I began by rereading the short stories‚ the original essay‚ and the feedback that was given. After looking and reviewing all this information‚ I looked at the weakness in the essay. I started with the thesis statement. Even though the points of the thesis stayed the same‚ I tried
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University of Phoenix Material Outline and Thesis Statement Guide Create an outline that includes details that support your thesis. Identify at least three main points and at least two supporting details per main point. Write all supporting details and sub details in complete sentences. Include both in-text citations in the outline and a references page following the outline. Many of your supporting details and sub details will need in-text citations. Outline only the body of your
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I. Introduction A. Finding childcare can be hard and you may find yourself wondering how can childcare benefit your child. B. Thesis statement: Finding child care is important to me because childcare helps with language and social development‚ prepares children for future schooling‚ and is workforce support for parents. II. Body My first reason: Childcare helps with language and social development 1.More possibilities to connect with other children equals more chances to learn how to socialize
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Steroids Outline Thesis Statement: The use of steroids has forever changed the world with its adverse effects‚ use in sports‚ and use by adolescents. I. Introduction II. Adverse Effects A. Hormonal Imbalance B. Liver Damage III. Use In Sports A. Use in Bodybuilding B. Use in the MLB IV. Use By Adolescents A. Pressure To Get “BIG” for Sports B. Not Knowing The Side Effects V. Conclusion Steroids Outline Thesis Statement: The use of steroids has forever changed the world with
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developing a decent thesis statement‚ and figuring out what questions to ask in order to ascertain more information about the paper that has been assigned. One of the first things to do when encountering any kind of assignment is to create an outline based off of what the directions say. Outlines can be revised later
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THE EXTENT OF THE ATONEMENT A PAPER SUBMITTED TO DR. ROBERT WETMORE IN PARTIAL FULFILLMENT OF THE REQUIREMENTS FOR SYSTEMATIC THEOLOGY II BY JACOB A. KESLING BATON ROUGE‚ LOUISIANA AUGUST 10‚ 2009 Table of Contents Thesis Statement 3 Introduction: Why this Discussion is Important 3-4 Limited Atonement 5 Biblical Foundation for Limited Atonement 5-7 Other Theological Considerations for Limited Atonement 7-8 Unlimited Atonement 9 Biblical Foundation
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Whitney Bennett Jacqueline May English Composition 1 June 20 2015 10 Thesis Statements based on Michael Moore’s Documentary Film “Bowling for Columbine” Thesis #1: The United States have a higher murder rate with firearms than Canada‚ even though Canada have the same amount of guns as the U.S. The violent history of America contributes greatly in the crimes presented in our society. Response: I agree with this because Canada has more gun control than the United States
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DATA ANALYTICS USING HADOOP AND ITS FUNTIONALITIES Thesis statement: In the modern world‚ the delivery of treatment models is rapidly changing and many decisions are made behind these changes are driven by using data. In today’s world‚ it is becoming much important to understand as much as possible about the patient by picking up the warning signs of illness at early stage of treatment than later stage. So‚ Big data and Hadoop in healthcare sector are being used to predict occurrence of diseases
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Robert E. Lee was a Confederate General in the American Civil War. He was born January 19‚ 1807 in Stratford‚ Westmoreland County‚ Virginia. He was the youngest son of the Revolutionary War hero general Henry Lee‚ who was also known as “Light-Horse Harry Lee”. He married Mary; daughter of G. W. P. Custis‚ the adopted son of Washington. My Thesis is that Robert E. Lee was a great general in the Civil War. He proved he was great even though his resources usually were not. In 1825 he entered West
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Thesis Statement: Though the loss of my first born son‚ Austin‚ was a traumatic experience‚ it has brought great perspective into my life by creating unexpected strength‚ thankfulness‚ and wisdom. Three reasons this event is significant: I found strength I never knew I had. I will never forget how hollow I felt leaving the hospital without my baby. Some days I didn’t think I could even manage getting out of bed. But‚ somehow I found strength I never knew I had to persevere to not only get out
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