Throughout my writing experience I have always struggled with my body paragraphs. I tend to always have a strong introduction but once I began to go into my first body paragraph I lose my train of thought. One of my main issues is that I get to wordy. Which then leaves me with fragments. Lastly‚ which I’m sure most people have an issue with is basic grammar errors such as‚ spelling and placing commas. I feel that my writing has had a small progression. Through this class I have learned more writing
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At age 11‚ my mother was diagnosed with breast cancer. It was caught early enough that she had a good chance of overcoming it but‚ at 11‚ anything that ended with the word "cancer" sounded like a death sentence to me. Overnight‚ a previously silent genetic mutation had flipped my world upside down. Going through chemotherapy and radiation was taxing on my mother both physically and emotionally‚ as one might expect‚ but it was also taxing on my entire family. This experience was the first time I ever
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still remember the feeling I experienced when my mother told me we were moving to America. I felt as if time had stopped and I did not know what to think. However‚ to tell you the truth‚ I was more excited than nervous. Nevertheless‚ I could not imagine the fact that I was no longer going to be able to spend time with my friends or practice playing badminton with other teams at my school. Although I realized I would miss my country‚ I understood that my family’s move to America would grant me a better
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FDAVI Physics Akinwumi Fiyin 05-01-2014 MY EXPERIENCE ABOUT ROLLER COASTERS I had a great experience about roller coasters even though I have not climbed one before. Roller coaster is a popular amusement ride developed for amusement parks and modern theme parks. There are two main types of roller coasters which are the steel and wooden roller coaster. Steel coasters have tubular steel tracks‚ and are known for their smooth ride and often convoluted shapes that frequently
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For some‚ writing an essay is as easy as sitting down at a typewriter and beginning to type‚ but for others‚ it is a burden or their worst experience‚ maybe because of the lack of practice and knowledge. When in school students are taught how to write‚ although not all students graduated as established writers‚ every students leaves school knowing how to write because their teachers taught them to do so. Students who takes classes seriously not only allows them to pass a certain subject‚ but also
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lives. One of my favorite teachers always used to say‚ " Life is not always a matter of holding good cards; on occasion‚ it requires being able to play a poor hand well." As a sophomore in high school‚ I had to face my first real challenge with adversity. My parents had to leave me on my own for multiple weeks on end to help support another sibling in a different state. Adversity had hit me in this stage of my life‚ because I was in a position where I had to mature faster than most of my peers. Because
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My Virtual Child Experience Mikayla Jeffryes Colorado State University HDFS 101 2014 Dr. Ashley Harvey Theoretical Framework and Influence of Parenting Every decision that a parent makes in terms of the way they discipline and comfort their child directly affects multiple aspects of that child’s life as they grow and develop. Different parenting choices develop into parenting styles‚ or the practices that parents exhibit in relation to their children and their beliefs
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help and care for people. My mom is a nurse and has been for 20 years. She never pushed me towards nursing‚ I think she wanted me to figure out who I wanted to be. I think with her experience as a nurse I have learned through her what it takes to care for a person and the sacrifices she makes in order to be the best nurse possible. I think she worked hard to be where she is at now. I am grateful for her showing me what my calling is also. I want to be a nurse; I believe with my compassion and caring
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As a young child‚ I would hide behind my mother and grandmother when anyone was approaching; but when I got home‚ I was a pretty outgoing kid. Then‚ in middle school‚ I was an enthusiastic pre-teen longing for attention‚ constantly joking around. Friends took my feelings lightly‚ and began to see me as more of a novelty than as a person. My best friend no longer came to me with her latest crush‚ or secret. I was alone‚ and home life was not much better. Constantly having rude words thrown at me‚
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Northwood‚ I felt uncomfortable with the language because it’s not my first. I did not know anyone or know anything really about the school. I knew nothing about the hockey program‚ academics‚ friends‚ coaches‚ teachers‚ life style‚ etc. When I first got into my room‚ I thought to myself‚ “ oh my god‚ this is going to be my room for the whole year…‚ I don’t know anyone and have any idea what anyone is like.. I’m going to be in my room for most of the year”. I felt so out of place being here for the first
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