Editing Worksheet for Essay Drafts: ENG 111 Your Name Gregory Wishart 1. Name of the essay author Shakara Beals 2. Is the thesis statement the last sentence in the introductory paragraph and does it contain the three points? Yes ___ List the three points: a. liabilities incurred by the business b. financing of the business c. input and involvement in the business 3. Outline the essay below. Thesis Statement (copy) There are many similarities as well as differences
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under fire due to manufacturing issues that lead to an almost two-year delivery delay . The Airbus CEO‚ Noel Forgeard’s overly ambitious plan‚ poor product management‚ breach of public information responsibility‚ and insider trading‚ make him my choice of worst CEO. Nicola Clark and Katrin Bennhold emphasized that a leader is not likely to be effective without planning ‚ especially for an ambitious plan like the A380. While Forgeard promised to deliver the first A380 aircraft within five years‚
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see and explore. The word Ontario itself is literally translated to “beautiful water‚” and it absolutely lives up to that name. While Ontario is not ordinarily a “vacation destination‚” there are several reasons why it should be. The province has an abundance of waterfalls‚ parks‚ and historical landmarks that make it a perfect vacation spot. There are several historical formations found in Ontario; among them‚
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1. Kim Jong Un: Kim Jong Un is by far the worst dictator on this list‚ not only because he has an unsound mind‚ but because he‚ and those who came before him‚ have destroyed any chance of anyone helping the country. Through the years‚ Kim Jong Un has been known for doing and saying inane things‚ i.e. communicating with dolphins‚ not pooping‚ and executing those who do not agree with him‚ and will continue doing these things until his death or the death of his country. Yet‚ the real problem lies with
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THE CONCEPT OF FUN FILLED VACATION HAS CHANGED Good morning‚ respected Principal Ma’am‚ worthy teachers and my dear friends. Today I would like to present my views on the topic ‘The Concept of fun filled Vacation Has Changed.’ It has been rightly said by Earl Wilson that ‘A vacation is what you take when you can no longer take what you have been taking.’ The word vacation brings a smile‚ arousing a feeling of happiness looking forward to a break from the mundane routine in one’s life. The concept
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In the story “The Worst mistake in the History of the Human Race” Diamond raised several different key points about the arrival of agriculture. Diamond‚ Rousseau and Gray was not fond on agriculture‚ but throughout the story they mention how agriculture was bad for humankind because it increased calorie quantity at the cost of quality‚ because it contributed to deep class divisions. Despite its chances of dividing everyone into different groups; the arrival of agriculture is what everyone needed
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Repeat Summer Vacation is for the reader to understand why he returns to the same vacation destination year after year instead of traveling somewhere new. Lindberg’s article has strategies that start from the beginning to the end that help with this. If Lindberg wouldn’t have used the tools he had availed to him‚ his article would have been confusing and would loose the reader. However‚ since Lindberg used the tools his article was a very successful‚ easy to follow‚ relatable‚ and held my attention
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13 The Worst Mistakein the History of the Human Race Jared Diamond What we eat and how we eat are imPortant both nutritionally and culturally. This selection suggests that how we get what we eat-through gathering and hunting versus agriculture‚ for example-has draThis seemspretty obvious.We all matic consequences. imagine what a struggle it must have been before the We developmentof agricu-lture. think of our ancestors spending their days searching for roots and berries to eat‚or out at the crack
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Jared Diamond* May 1987 Illustrations by Elliott Danfield To science we owe dramatic changes in our smug self-image. Astronomy taught us that our earth isn’t the center of the universe but merely one of billions of heavenly bodies. From biology we learned that we weren’t specially created by God but evolved along with millions of other species. Now archaeology is demolishing another sacred belief: that human history over the past million years has been a long tale of progress. In particular‚ recent
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dangerous places a child can be in. Also Even though the mother Lenore Skenazy provided her son with a subway map‚a MetroCard and money I still thought that she was insane until I read her other two articles one of which is called “More From America’s Worst Mom:9-Years-Old on The Subway‚ Continued” as well as “A Different Kind of Back-to-School Sail” which convinced me that parents are way too protective and they think that they can protect their kids from everything that seems or looks dangerous‚by keeping
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