grade for my Visual essay. I wanted to focus on staying on topic because that was one of the things that I struggled with and got points taken off because of that. I also wanted to work on my comma splices‚ and punctuation‚ which I usually struggle with and got points taken off. I also wanted to improve working on my tone‚ and the way I write or express myself while writing because sometimes‚ I get comments from the Writing Center‚ and from my professor. In my Rebuttal Essay‚ I think I did a very
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English W131 Mrs. Dunn 18 October 2012 A Critique of Eric Bartel’s “My Problem with Her Anger” When most people get married‚ they go into the marriage with the expectations and hopes that everything will go as planned‚ that they will always get along‚ and that the responsibilities will be evenly divided between both spouses. And for two working spouses who have children‚ they share the expectation that no one parent will be more of a caretaker than the other. Eric Bartels‚ a feature writer
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was to write an essay‚ however long‚ on what band meant to them and how it has affected their lives. I instantly knew what I was going to say in my essay‚ how long‚ etc‚ etc‚ because band was honestly my life. Music is my world‚ and I would definitely not be who I am today without it. We had two days to write our essay‚ and let me tell you‚ I revised that essay a million times. I needed it to be perfect. Not only was I after the scholarship‚ but I also wanted anyone that read my essay to know that music
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books about Slave narratives in order to be more understood by others and show the honesty for what happened. In the 19th century slave narratives were written firstly to contract slavery and to aid in the fight for its cancellation by providing eye-witness accounts of the victims of the strange institution to the American and European public (yale.edu). Until the Depression Era slaves narratives outnumbered novels written by African American (yale.edu). Because many of these narratives were used as abolitionist
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“Come on Haley are you going to go paintballing with us or not? “ my mother invited with slight anger in her voice. “Yes I will go with you but it’s on you if I get hurt.” I jokingly respond. I made the choice to go paintballing because I’ve always wanted the experience to go and to prove to my mother that it’s dangerous. We drive down a narrow gravel road to a big grassy field with a small shack near the parking lot. I take a nice deep breath through my nose and smell the country fresh crisp air
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Karley Pohlmann Personal Narrative Composition‚ 8am Red‚ that is what comes to my mind when I remember May 3rd of my freshman year in high school. Red was my totaled out car‚ red was the stained seat fabric from my brother’s blood‚ red was the flashing lights and sirens‚ and red was my eyes from the tears I cried. I could not change that day‚ I could not turn back time and so my heart bled out red. As I was a freshman getting ready to get my license within the next year‚ my step dad bought
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Essay 1: Narrative (500-750 words) Complete paper copy for peer review due in class on Wednesday‚ February 4 Final copy due in dropbox on eCampus by class time on Monday‚ February 9 For your Narrative Essay‚ you will be telling the story of how a specific experience changed the way you see the world. You may NOT use outside sources of any kind. If you feel like you need one‚ discuss it with your instructor. You will use a funnel introduction beginning with general statements about the topic and
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So‚ shoutout to Crystalwolf101‚ Snow Fire‚ and White Horse! The tomato was first used for food in Mexico and first grown for food in Central/South America. I know‚ I haven’t been updating lately‚ but sorry‚ I cut my finger with a saw‚ so it hurt to type on anything that wasn’t a phone‚ and I got stung by a pesky mosquito on my eyelid‚ and that was swollen. These might all sound like excuses‚ so sorry about that‚ so I wrote a slightly longer chapter. Warning: Violence and deaths‚ probably in the
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Steps to Dealing with anger‚ jealousy‚ anxiety‚ troubling thoughts: *point to ponder: We can’t be right with God and hold grudges and/or be angry at someone. 1) Identify it. ( What is the source of my anger/fear/troubling thoughts?)Be willing to look back and ask what am I thinking these thoughts for. If its anger‚what am I angry about. If I’m fearful or worried what am I worrying about. 2) Confess it. “Yes I’m angry/fearful/worried/ etc.. “. Be willing to acknowledge it.
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Joshua Frans Mrs. Crawbuck Sophomore English 26 September‚ 2016 Cultural Narrative When I was five‚ I just moved into a new elementary school after kindergarten. I was the youngest in my whole class‚ and I was one of a few Indian students in that class. My height and my brain set me apart from the other students. I was very good at math and I had a general knowledge of select things that weren’t necessary for first grade. I also loved to read‚ and I was already reading books that were made for kids
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