grade for my Visual essay. I wanted to focus on staying on topic because that was one of the things that I struggled with and got points taken off because of that. I also wanted to work on my comma splices‚ and punctuation‚ which I usually struggle with and got points taken off. I also wanted to improve working on my tone‚ and the way I write or express myself while writing because sometimes‚ I get comments from the Writing Center‚ and from my professor. In my Rebuttal Essay‚ I think I did a very
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was to write an essay‚ however long‚ on what band meant to them and how it has affected their lives. I instantly knew what I was going to say in my essay‚ how long‚ etc‚ etc‚ because band was honestly my life. Music is my world‚ and I would definitely not be who I am today without it. We had two days to write our essay‚ and let me tell you‚ I revised that essay a million times. I needed it to be perfect. Not only was I after the scholarship‚ but I also wanted anyone that read my essay to know that music
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Karley Pohlmann Personal Narrative Composition‚ 8am Red‚ that is what comes to my mind when I remember May 3rd of my freshman year in high school. Red was my totaled out car‚ red was the stained seat fabric from my brother’s blood‚ red was the flashing lights and sirens‚ and red was my eyes from the tears I cried. I could not change that day‚ I could not turn back time and so my heart bled out red. As I was a freshman getting ready to get my license within the next year‚ my step dad bought
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Essay 1: Narrative (500-750 words) Complete paper copy for peer review due in class on Wednesday‚ February 4 Final copy due in dropbox on eCampus by class time on Monday‚ February 9 For your Narrative Essay‚ you will be telling the story of how a specific experience changed the way you see the world. You may NOT use outside sources of any kind. If you feel like you need one‚ discuss it with your instructor. You will use a funnel introduction beginning with general statements about the topic and
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A Snowboard Have you ever seen a giant before? I have. I’ve seen colossal white giants at Lake Tahoe before‚ and the story of the first time I experienced one up close is what will hopefully get me an A on this assignment (Mr. Maples‚ please have mercy on my C+). I remember how at that time the mountain’s raw and terrifying glare already frightened me enough to reconsider my actions and choose to give away to fear. What did I‚ a small‚ scrawny 9 year old boy‚ do in the face of these giants? Believe
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Lost but Not Forgotten It was a cold night in January‚ when he awoke covered in snow‚ his board broken and hanging from his left foot‚ the binding from his right still securely strapped to hit now numb‚ right foot It was now nearing Zero degrees Fahrenheit he thought‚ and not a soul was anywhere to be found. Zane Farrell had last seen another creature what he guessed was about six hours ago. As far as he knew he was about thirty miles north of Bull Creek‚ at the local ski area- Bull Mountain
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Joshua Frans Mrs. Crawbuck Sophomore English 26 September‚ 2016 Cultural Narrative When I was five‚ I just moved into a new elementary school after kindergarten. I was the youngest in my whole class‚ and I was one of a few Indian students in that class. My height and my brain set me apart from the other students. I was very good at math and I had a general knowledge of select things that weren’t necessary for first grade. I also loved to read‚ and I was already reading books that were made for kids
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At the end of July‚ I considered giving up on writing again. With all the hours I poured into my last essay‚ it felt like a slap in the face that they didn’t even send a “thank you for trying” letter. I spent the announcement day sitting on my in-law’s porch sipping coffee with Baileys and stewing over yet another essay contest loss. Lacking in ideas of where I went wrong‚ I tried imitating old photos of authors again for inspiration. Leaning on the arm of the wicker chair with my chin resting on
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I was panting‚ really hard‚ from running for so long. And now there’s a strange blue and black-haired girl who is currently yelling at me‚ telling me that I should come with her‚ from the other side of the diner. I duck as someone throws a water jug at my face‚ most probably thinking that I’m a flesh demon. Which I am most definitely not. Seeing it unfit to fight back‚ because I was heavily outnumbered‚ I quickly pulled my black hoodie down onto my face and swung myself from underneath the table
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Film Review: Good Night‚ and Good Luck By Nina Karimi “Good Night‚ and Good Luck” is not your typical Hollywood film full of conventional action‚ cliff hangers‚ and romance. It is however a masterpiece of its time‚ about an era that many Americans try to forget. George Clooney‚ an esteemed American Actor and director of this film tried to capture a period of time known as the McCarthy Era where the “red scare” or fear of communism allowed the Senator from Wisconsin to try and convict
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