grade for my Visual essay. I wanted to focus on staying on topic because that was one of the things that I struggled with and got points taken off because of that. I also wanted to work on my comma splices‚ and punctuation‚ which I usually struggle with and got points taken off. I also wanted to improve working on my tone‚ and the way I write or express myself while writing because sometimes‚ I get comments from the Writing Center‚ and from my professor. In my Rebuttal Essay‚ I think I did a very
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Case Analysis (Post – Promotion Peer Pressure and Amanda Learns to be the Boss)alysis ) Submitted by: Alagos‚ Criselda Barles‚ Daymarie Espiritu‚ Angela Frilles‚ Cristina Pernites‚ Ma. Theresa Cassandra Valencia‚ Jamaica Submiited To: Mr. Pascual Abrazaldo September 6‚ 2013 1. If you were Amanda‚ would have you done the same thing as she did? Why or Why not? Yes‚ I would do the same thing as Amanda did. To become an effective leader you must know everything that you need
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nervous and at times I would forget what I would say because I was afraid of talking. I definitely improved especially during my Personal Narrative even though I did not complete this speech months after the speech day. A Personal Narrative “is a personal experience that had an impact on the speaker”. (K. Hunter‚ pg 16) Its very hard for me to tell a personal story about myself when I barely know anyone in the class.
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With Peer Pressure” Peer pressure comes in many different forms. There is smoking‚ drinking‚ and the pressure to be as thin as the celebrities on television and magazines. Peer pressure can make a person do things that normally they would never do. How are you supposed to deal with it when for most people it’s everywhere around them? My solution was JROTC‚ or Junior Reserve Officer Training Corps. JROTC helps you deal with these things by building your self-esteem‚ you set a goal for your life ahead
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Sarah Manuel Effective Speaking 27th January‚ 2012 Personal Narrative Outline Thesis: There are many uncontrolled circumstances that can change your life in an instant. Therefore spend as much time as you can with your loved ones and live in the moment‚ because time is never enough. Introduction: 1. Do you know how it feels when you are this close to losing everything important to you? 2. There was this one incident that completely changed my outlook on life and it took place while I was
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Socrates’ Conviction Was Socrates guilty of the charges brought against him? Does his trial and execution represent the effective functioning of the Athenian democracy‚ or a failure of it? Why‚ in a society relishing freedom and democracy‚ would a seventy-year-old philosopher be executed for what he was teaching? What could Socrates have done to prompt a jury of 500 Athenians send him to his death just a few years before he would have died naturally? He was charged with not believing in the gods
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religious faith‚ personal time‚ and culture. The journal named‚ "How Will You Measure Your Life?" in Harvard Business Review‚ which is written by Dr. Clayton Christensen‚ alert about unclear positioning priorities between our jobs and our personal lives. The article mainly emphasized on creating a strategy‚ building a purpose‚ allocating resources‚ creating a culture‚ avoiding the marginal costs mistake‚ remembering the importance of humility‚ and choosing the right yardstick. This essay will only emphasize
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At the end of July‚ I considered giving up on writing again. With all the hours I poured into my last essay‚ it felt like a slap in the face that they didn’t even send a “thank you for trying” letter. I spent the announcement day sitting on my in-law’s porch sipping coffee with Baileys and stewing over yet another essay contest loss. Lacking in ideas of where I went wrong‚ I tried imitating old photos of authors again for inspiration. Leaning on the arm of the wicker chair with my chin resting on
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Personal Narrative It was a few years ago. It seems like everything has changed. My appearance‚ my friends‚ myself. Even if everything has come and gone‚ I will never lose everything that makes me. All of that begins with me starting my instrument. I was deeply interested in band. I had always wanted to play an instrument‚ even though all I could do at the time was sing in chorus. “Today is my day‚” I thought to myself. “I will pick my instrument today!” My teacher said “Class is dismissed.” I grabbed
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tournaments I have acquired a great skill of time management. Sticking to a routine schedule has been one of the most useful tools I have ever crossed over. Everyday following the same schedule has gotten me into a groove that has proved to be beneficial. About 6 months after I touched the ice for the first time I tried out for and travel hockey team. Making the team and following through with hockey is one decision I have never looked back on or regretted. All of the amazing places I’ve
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