FIRST PARAGRAPHS First paragraphs are fundamental to the story and need to "hook" the reader in. If the first paragraph doesn’t grab you‚ then why would you read further? The first paragraph is where you are introduced to the tone of the story and sets the stage by introducing the main character(s) and giving information to entice us to continue reading. Three stories that have strong first paragraphs that draw us in and help us understand the character and story are: "A Sick Call" by Morley
Premium Paragraph Remembrance Day Protagonist
Rubric for a Well-Written Paragraph Categories of Performance: Beginner (1) Basic (2) Intermediate (3) Advanced (4) Tone The tone is inappropriate for the writing purpose. The tone shifts from formal to informal and is not consistent. The tone shifts occasionally from formal to informal‚ or vice versa. The appropriate tone is used consistently. Opening sentence The sentence is incomplete and does not state the main idea. The sentence is complete‚ but does not state the main idea. The sentence
Premium Morality Ethics Orthography
Alyssa Petsinis ENG-1D1 Mrs. Kok March 23rd 2015 Comparison Paragraph between The Quiet American and Oryx and Crake. Throughout life there are people who thirst and hunger for power‚ and people who strive to survive off of it. Often people let power consume them creating selfish tendencies that may result in bringing chaos and suffering to the people around them. This behavior may cause destruction to the foundation of many societies all for the benefit of an individual’s selfish desires. In
Premium Margaret Atwood Human English-language films
Flowers For Algernon Theme Paragraph In the realistic fiction‚ Flowers For Algernon‚ the author‚ Daniel Keyes‚ tried to convey the theme that a person shouldn’t change who they are for someone else. Charlie’s relationship with Alice represented this theme because one of the reasons Charlie signed up for the experiment was because he wanted to impress her. He thought if he became smarter‚ Alice would be proud of him‚ and he would be able to speak to her about smart-people stuff. Although she was
Premium English-language films Flowers for Algernon Daniel Keyes
Paragraph 1 While searching to the internet‚ I have seen that you are looking for someone to hire for the position of Medical Billing and Coder at one of your Phil Health locations. This position is responsible for accurate recording and processing data about patients‚ such as treatment records‚ insurance information‚ bills and received payments. They organize all the patient’s records‚ bills and statements and confirm that they are free from errors before coding information. My friend’s
Premium Physician Patient Medicine
Fahrenheit 451 Analytical Paragraph By Claire Sylvester Happiness is false in Fahrenheit451; the government defines it and those who submit to society’s ways of happiness are not perturbed by reality. The government delivers to society frivolous entertainment giving them distractions from the grievances of reality. Beatty lectures Montag on why books are bad while he is at home faking sick: “If you don’t want a man unhappy politically‚ don’t give him two sides of a question to worry him; give
Premium Fahrenheit 451 Truth Aristotle
Following is a sample outline of an argumentative essay (of 5 paragraphs) about whether street children are victims or criminals. OUTLINE Thesis Statement:- Street children are definitely victims of the society for social‚ financial‚ and psychological reasons. Body Paragraph 1: Street children are the result of family disintegration. A. The father deserts the family. 1. escapes from the family 2. marries again 3. dies B. Uneducated parents lack awareness
Free Marriage Sociology Sibling
Usher II Analysis Paragraph In “Usher II” the author provides examples of allusion in order for the readers to visualize the setting of the story. In the story Stendahl wasn’t happy with the government burning all the books down. When Mr. Bigelow came to see the house he said that he thought the government did was the right thing. Stendahl got mad at him and told him to get out of the house before something happens. “ Tweedledum following Tweedledee‚ Mock-Turtle‚ Dormouse‚ drowned bodies from
Premium The Fall of the House of Usher English-language films Edgar Allan Poe
NAME : Citra Hardiyanti Ningrum NIM : 132084022 SUBJECT : Paragraph Writing B REVISION Outline 1: The stolen case in the boarding houses in Lidah Wetan that recently happens are mostly caused by two major factors. a. Human errors. 1. By the room’s owner. 2. By the roommate. 3. By the room’s neighbors. b. The building’s condition. 1. There is no any CCTV or safety alarm. 2. The window is easy to open. 3. The key’s locket on the door is easy to be sabotaged. We can see that human errors
Premium High school House Boarding house
Anthony Nguyen September 17‚ 2014 S.S. Island Paragraph A.N. Island The dictionary defines island as “a tract of land surrounded by water and is smaller than a continent”. The one and only A.N. Island was made an official island by Peter Nguyen on December 17‚ 1990. He was traveling on the ocean when he bumped into a piece of rock. He didn’t notice that he had bumped into the Cave of Death until Death Bear came. He was lucky that he had weapons on his boat such as robogun that he had invented
Premium Pacific Ocean Island English-language films